Open Poetry #28 |
Poppy |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I dream of you often Poppy dear and you never change where you lie is planted poppy she blooms tall like sail of your tail gently afloat in our garden, Dreaming of you often Poppy dear I know what you may be trying to tell me as I sleep and he purrs he misses you like I miss you like I'll miss him when he's gone. Instant karma's gonna get you. [This message has been edited by gemjop (08-05-2003 03:13 PM).] |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
wow, this was a very very very nice descriptive write...i love it...and the line with poppy dear...that was so neat ( forgive me ) quote: ri * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Interesting read. Truly enjoyed this. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thankyou Poppy was my cat of 10 years. Half of one of the best birthday presents I ever had. She was naughty, but nice. Growing up together, she was more the irritable teenager than i was..always biting like a madwoman, angry as hell..then purring. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
beautifull..but how could anyone be more irritable than you? Quote: Tell me how you do it? Tell meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! (lol..it's a step by step scientific formula..no I'm not kidding ) I have to turn my head untill my darkness goes Which is never. insanity is not a crime [This message has been edited by Wind (08-05-2003 05:26 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Aaaawwwww, Gemma, this is so sweet. Just beautiful. I love my pets so much, too. Hugs to you, my friend Ethel |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderful write, Gem dearest.. A lovely name for a cat, too. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is just such wonderful writing, thanks for sharing it with us Andy |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Gemma, it is so hard to lose a pet. They become such a part of our lives even if they are naughty and grumpy. Our dog, Bernadette is an unbelievable grump, but we love her dearly. I enjoyed this, as I do all your pieces. Hugs, Marti |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
There is a lot of love in pet poems. I recently lost a little rascal cat who was about the same age. He was much loved and is missed daily by his brother and by me. Thanks for sharing this. s.a.g. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Gemma~ God I know how you feel...I had to put my beloved dog down a few months ago and I hate myself for it...I am sure karma is going to pay me for doing it....I miss my Ty so much... Truly beautiful piece.. Susan |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
it's about her little kitty!!! yay. I still love this one but yah got a new cat..that jusps up on your computer. lol never use the hourglass again, or I will become alergic to time... oooh...I want to make that into a poem. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" -Tool [This message has been edited by Wind (09-15-2003 07:54 PM).] |
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