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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2003-08-02 08:22 AM

It used to be I wrote my thoughts
while praying you would see
the needs that I could not express
The deepest want in me
But you just never had the time
I wasn't on your list
I wonder if you wonder what you've missed...

So many years, so many times
I felt such deep despair
The loneliness you handed me
became my daily fare
I tried to hold myself in check
to keep the promise made
But it wasn't worth the price we would have paid...

Now looking back through time's calm eyes
I see a different way
I see you as a friend, who shared my life along the way
But now it's full with one who gives me joy
and that is when
the words spill out, from heart to hand
So now I write for him...

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

1 posted 2003-08-02 10:34 AM

Oh yes, to move on but still be able to reflect on the memories ... I know this feeling well.

And it had a happy ending, too ... gooody ... like that part the best. Keep him for he listens.

Enjoyed.

Poe_Pot_Pie
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

2 posted 2003-08-02 01:08 PM

Very nice. You use words very well.

Two thumbs up!

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

3 posted 2003-08-02 01:18 PM

Well done, Sunnyone!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-08-02 06:03 PM

and sometimes, I think
you write for yourself...

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2003-08-02 08:20 PM

Hi Janette, and I like happy endings too! Yes, I believe I will keep him...or rather, we will keep each other!!!  Thank you...~S~

Hi Poe_Pot_Pie, and I gladly accept the thumbs!!!!  Appreciate it, and thank you!  ~S~

Hi Elizabeth, and always happy to see you here!!! Thank you so much...~S~

Hi Sunshine, and you know me well!!!  Yes, I will confess that I do write for myself, and through myself...I just love to write whenever possible, and when my muse cooperates!!!  Thank you, sun-sis...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2003-08-02 11:12 PM

Sounds like you found yourself someone who appreciates your words, and you!

Many hugs Sunnyone~ This is just beautiful!

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-08-04 02:33 AM

What a wonderful thing to happen to someone who seems so deserving. Lovely words! Very nice.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-08-04 05:12 AM

very nice...good for you

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

9 posted 2003-08-04 09:57 AM

But you just never had the time
I wasn't on your list
I wonder if you wonder what you've missed...

You can bet he wonders -- and if he sees this poem, he will absolutely know, poor devil.....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

10 posted 2003-08-04 10:40 AM

I know that it is an old saying that as one door closes another opens. I hope that you will be happier through the new door. It is such a beautiful poem. Maggie

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

11 posted 2003-08-04 10:41 AM

I know that it is an old saying that as one door closes another opens. I hope that you will be happier through the new door. It is such a beautiful poem. Maggie

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2003-08-04 10:45 AM

lovely write, and I have decided to no longer write for anyone but myself. At least you know your words are appreciated by someone.

even if it is just by me

Maureen

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

13 posted 2003-08-04 11:12 AM

Nicely done.
angelblueyes

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2003-08-04 07:50 PM

enjoy your read

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

15 posted 2003-08-04 09:39 PM

Sunnyone

I just love this verse:

"Now looking back through time's calm eyes
I see a different way
I see you as a friend, who shared my life along the way"

I have felt this way many times and you said it so beautifully. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

Ariana

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

16 posted 2003-08-04 09:54 PM

"Now looking back through time's calm eyes
I see a different way
I see you as a friend, who shared my life along the way"

--I have come to that place in my life as well. You expressed what is in my heart.

~ I am so please for you that you have now found true happiness! God bless you both!

A beautiful, healing write.

Linda

~*Tantalize*~
Junior Member

since 2003-07-29

Posts 26
Sunny California (San Francisco Bay Area)

17 posted 2003-08-04 10:01 PM

that was a wonderful poem, well writting, thanks for posting.

"There are moments in my life I will always remember, not because they were big events, but because you were there to make the worth remembering." ~Un

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

18 posted 2003-08-04 10:30 PM

"Now looking back through time's calm eyes
I see a different way"

Nicely put.

Kraw'

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

19 posted 2003-08-05 01:09 AM

Hi BluesSerenade, and it yes, although he claims he is not a poet, he understands the workings of the art, and is there to bounce ideas off of.  Thank you for being here...~S~

Hi SharaRose, and I appreciate your reply, because it reminds me that in order to deserve the goodness in life, we have to give that same goodness to others...thank you so much...~S~

Hi passing shadows, and thank you!! All thumbs ups are very welcome here!!  ~S~

Hi Ratleader, and yes, he will probably see this poem.  It wasn't meant to hurt, but just a question I have always had...thank you for replying, as I love the feedback!! ~S~

Hi Maggie, and sometimes we have to go a long ways to find that new door, but when it opens, it's like sunshine on the other side!! Thank you, and I wish you much happiness too...~S~

Hi Maureen, and to know that you do appreciate these words is just what this writer enjoys!!  The sharing with family here is very fulfilling for any poet, eh?  ~S~

Hi angelblueyes, and thank you...it's nice to have you drop by for a read here!!  ~S~

Hi vandana, and I'm always glad to see you in reply...it means a lot to me...thank you so much...~S~

Hi Ariana, and yes...some of us have reached that point where the pain has been replaced with better feelings...I wish that for all of my friends, and I do so thank you for seeing what was important here...~S~

Hi Linda, and I also am very happy for you. It takes a lot of trying to reach that point, and it's not always a smooth road...we have to make it that way, I think.  Thank you, my friend, and I also wish you the very best of happiness!!  ~S~

Hi *~Tantalise~*, and thank you for stopping by to share some time with me here...~S~

Hi 'Kraw', and those are my favorite thoughts too...it's better to focus on the good parts of the past then to cast all of our efforts on the wrongs...thank you for sharing your thoughts with me!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

20 posted 2003-08-31 01:35 AM

Well look what I found...yet another bit of buried treasure.

This is wonderful, Sunnyone...so beautifully expressed.
I've missed reading you, so I'm very happy to have
stumbled upon this treat tonight.

Hugs to you, friend,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

21 posted 2003-08-31 02:01 AM

Exquisite.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

22 posted 2003-08-31 02:03 AM

you wrote my heart here.....

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

23 posted 2003-08-31 02:06 AM

Hi Vicky, and thank you so much!!!  I enjoyed writing this piece, and glad you enjoyed reading it...~S~

Hi Skyfyre, and glad you stopped by to joing me here!!!  Thank you...~S~

Hi SEA, and I've always felt that we have similar hearts while reading your writings...thank you so much!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Cerenity'sLine
Junior Member

since 2003-08-26

Posts 21

24 posted 2003-09-01 08:57 AM

Hi Sunnyone,

Im loving this one so much, it carrys a calmness to it,

Love, Cerenity

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

25 posted 2003-09-01 11:43 AM

Let me just tell you I recently has something happen to me so I can relate...

Well done..

Susan

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

26 posted 2003-09-02 01:04 PM

Sunny - the spirituality I see in this i lovely and here:

I wonder if you wonder what you've missed...

I often wonder myself . . .
beautiful writing
xxoo

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