Open Poetry #28 |
He Moves My Doubts And Fears........Love Triolets |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Webshots Photo ~<>~ When fear and doubt enters into my head You are always near with your love and care With soothing words you calm and ease my dread When fear and doubt enters into my head You know what to speak with love you are led Your love for me you give beyond compare When fear and doubt enters into my head You are always near with your love and care ~<>~ Your love for me you know how to express More than ever known you show me this true With love as tender as a breaths caress Your love for me you know how to express Inner feelings we never do suppress They, as a cool summers breeze flow gently through Your love for me you know how to express More than ever known you show me this true ~<>~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-07-2003 03:02 AM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I've said it before, and i'll say it again..you are GOOD at these! They do suit you sweet gal. much loved to you and your love, hope you are well! love gem xxxxxxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Two turtledoves.....how absolutely perfect! Sweet triolets of violets! Loves 'n hugs 'n smiles, Linda |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrificly written,,,, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
These are lovely, Ethel. Back to the top... Hugs, ~Vicky If you judge people, you have no time to love them. |
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jbsoria Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 26Phoenix, Arizona |
Wow, it must feel good... I guess it gives all us "hopeless" romantics a reason to keep on going, just knowing that this is out there for us, too. |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Great poem, keep the poems coming. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful expression and format Ethel, just lovely! Very much enjoyed these both! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Me too - Me too.... Very nicely triolet'd, Ethel... I enjoyed.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ethel, I believe love hopes all things and makes anything possible and I am so happy it is happening for you, sweet friend, for you are so deserving of true happiness! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Tried working with triolets myself recently - Very fun! Loved these. Nicely expressed. Beautiful sentiments. |
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