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TWENTY OR LESS...#134

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-08-05 10:49 AM

TWENTY OR LESS…#134

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon

Nerves strike
and crash

like shocks of time

breaking us
beyond safe keep

seeing changes

nothing

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-08-05 10:52 AM

Mark, I love so much the way you do these. I do believe that you can say more in less words than anyone I know. I sure do wish (sometimes) that I could accomplish that! But, sometimes I just love to talk...

Hugs

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-05-2003 10:56 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-08-05 11:01 AM

you got me thinking this morning

thanks...I have a small less than 20 within my poem ..In Love,
for you, Mark

hugss
M

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-08-07 01:02 PM

In just these few words you managed to capture that "fray"---

well done, Mark.

you made me want a zanax.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-08-07 01:13 PM

Your words always bring such thoughts to mind.You"re always making me think.

angelblueyes

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2003-08-07 09:17 PM

Hey Ethel, thanks for the encouragement -- these are always fun to concoct.

Thank you Maureen -- a distinct honor.

Serenity Blaze: ...uh... what's a zanax...?

I would have it no other way, Crystal -- glad you're up for it.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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