Open Poetry #28 |
Poet, Interrupted |
IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
he sees me everywhere like a dream to float and chastise dawn's discrepancy unlike twilight milky, soft risen from ashes phoenix who cried in the dust remains unfound to dwindle 'pon my fingers as I pen words dripping like ebony tears and landing on paper's whitened cheek sand, black, black hourglass draining with hues of sunset paled and wizened no more a portrait of opalescence but painted in my decadence tonight word weaver soundlessly forming little lullabies on the edges of tongues unspoken grievances are spoken through eyes of radiance and aging chamomile mixed with tea sipped with lips of hushing elegance appeased by fingers of heightened eloquence lacing more dew 'tween strands of tangled, cinnamon hair and he sees everything about me yet still laughs and bends to kiss me 'fore tongue and lips meet forming words, from pen falling onto paper thin rendering me silent sweet poet, interrupted. For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Always good to read you. forming words, from pen falling onto paper thin rendering me silent sweet poet, interrupted. This was perfect. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write n read,, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah...sweet remorse. Very, very nice... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"word weaver soundlessly forming little lullabies on the edges of tongues" ~ I especially enjoyed these lines!--There are several worthy of repeating! EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'll be keeping this beauty to read again. Thank you for sharing such a delightful write! Your words flow colorfully, with an artist's touch. (as per your sig? age alone doesn't imply quality visual/mindful experiences. ) |
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