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beautiful (for Kaoru, just cause I said so)
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beautiful (for Kaoru, just cause I said so) |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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I long to wipe those tears away, to set the sky aflame for you We lay, packed in cardboard boxes, stillborn life. Crack like ice and crumble like stones who repeatedly degrades, destroys paints panic red and black and blue whilst I defy gravity, you may tear your flesh apart, hide what you are. paper bags with holes, paper bags with stains and scratches bring your stars into daylight for you to wipe the dust from my skin And tell them, tell them for me That pretty is in your blood, but beautiful is in your bones insanity is not a crime |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
that was beautifull,because i said so  good write |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
thanks Chelsea, I hope she likes it. btw..this one does not come from my head Meg. well scientificaly it does but symbolicaly it is my heart. or whatever. you know..the big red thing full of blood. cos I l*ve you  insanity is not a crime [This message has been edited by Wind (09-05-2003 10:31 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This most certainly is beautiful... and she will love it! You continue to amaze me with your style, wisdom and grace of writing. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I just know Kaoru will love this as I think this is the perfect vision that matches this wonderful person's aura! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you two, you are so sweet. I smiled so much when I read that  insanity is not a crime |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
incredible...as all your poetry touches me...helen |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Liz, the both of you are old souls . . . That pretty is in your blood, but beautiful is in your bones I wish I had written those *smile* xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"That pretty is in your blood, but beautiful is in your bones" Good God Girl!! She will love it! This entire piece is so beautiful and who wouldn't feel honored to have someone write something so amazing for them! I loved the lines above...truly amazing piece! Susan |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
who repeatedly degrades, destroys paints panic red and black and blue whilst I defy gravity, you may tear your flesh apart, hide what you are. *in awe* I miss you when you're not here, then you make up for it with writes like this. Shes gonna love it. This is going on my wall. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gah, I do love it. The last lines are so wonderful. I'm saving this, it's kind of rare that I get little presents as cool as these. weeeee  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
yay..Liz is happy now insanity is not a crime |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Awesome Liz and a request? be happy more often oh and you two..Duet |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
was this happy? I never would've guessed. society these days seems hopeless and bent on destroying the world. I gave optamism a try..though Lizism is better..yanno, the who cares the glass is just a glass of water  and you said ya l@ve it when I do dark. heh.. meg? you and me anytime but only if Raph and Gem do one insanity is not a crime [This message has been edited by Wind (09-06-2003 03:07 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I do like lizisms and i do like dark but it's nice to see you smile from time to time.. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
As soon as Raffie and Gem post there's, I'm so there. Get to it, you guys. |
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