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noah j
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since 2003-03-05
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on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair

0 posted 2003-09-05 12:36 PM


the other night--
when all the people
had fallen away
slunk back into their holes
they had been busy digging during the day
i was walking around
looking for a hole
i left long ago

finally i just gave up
instead of being underground
covered by the filth
and blocked by the denseness of the earth
i decided to breathe clean air
true air
and the stuff i noticed

i saw for the first time
the world
as it was
i saw the olive gardens and moist branches
and i was happy

the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-09-05 12:42 PM


Absolutely breathtaking.I'm glad you could see these wonderful things of the world.
Crystal

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since 2002-09-29
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2 posted 2003-09-07 03:09 PM


i saw for the first time
the world
as it was
i saw the olive gardens and moist branches
and i was happy



I'm glad that you saw the good things of the world, too.
Ethel

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