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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Above Me Above me dark chariots roll With sounds of thunder in the stroll And streaks of lighting needle trace Sewing damage place to place. Bringing down a torrents rain Sounding like a railroad train Snapping windowpane so cruel that Each pellet explodes a jewel Veiling gray the searching eye Serving only sad of sigh Squeezing out a misty tear Denial of the suns revere And so I lean in mournful let The portals of the rain and wet And pry my mind to sooth the view To substitute a time with you It’s then I fantasize in sighs The wonder of your voice and eyes |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'd bet that thunder is really a drumroll for your 20,000th post... Whatcha think? Congratulations, sweet Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Perhaps sweet Nan, I never counted.  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ... That's one of the things that's so special about you - You don't keep score... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
What a good way to substitute, change the direction oof a storm to better visions. with the tropical storm henri rolling in just north of me, and hurricane fabian still out there looking would rather just read these pages of blue expecially when there are gems like this one to read enjoyed bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (09-05-2003 08:46 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sounds like it's raining in your part of the world Sy! Come sit, we'll have tea and chat a bit till it lets up. Oh...yes... CONGRATULATIONS ON THE 20,000 POSTS! ~Morning Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
congrats on your milestone posts... I think the rains have finally stopped here..at least for now. I hope you are safe and warm. M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bernie, Enjoyed your comment, thank you. Nancy, thank you and I'll be right over. Maureen, Thank you sweet, I'll stay as warm as I can. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Stand to the thunder, Sy... it's applause in de'skies... Congrats on 20,000 posts! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Now only you could figure that out. LOL |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awwww...sweet words for the hearer. Words that really melt the heart!! Lovely!   SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Above me dark chariots roll With sounds of thunder in the stroll And streaks of lighting needle trace Sewing damage place to place. Seymour, sounds like you are amidst the rains of the storms coming in. Stay safe, my friend. Hugs to you this morning  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SharaRose Thank you so much for the lovely. Ethel, I'll try my best sweet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning!--After a night like that, the morning sun must be a welcomed sight! Dear Sy, you are a mighty warrior and must grab hold of the chariot's reins and go where you want to go! You have that kind of power!  Sweeter dreams tonight, EA |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"Above me dark chariots roll With sounds of thunder in the stroll And streaks of lighting needle trace Sewing damage place to place." How do you do it? Well, we've had a beautiful summer here, and nothing to complain about, but I've actually begun craving some rain and storm. You described it so well, all my senses are craving. Shall we trade? I'll send you 88 degrees and a soft summer breeze, for your dark rolling chariots and a couple lightening needles. :-) ~K~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel With the arrows of an Angel I will go forth And stop the thunders roll and the streaks of lightings stroll. Thank you for the loan. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kahlil Just recieved your 88 degrees, expect the thunder and lighting soon. LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Rain Rain go away ... Sy and Randy want to play. A picnic on the beach instead of shivering under the covers in bed. Make the thunder pass on by ... let the lightening leave the sky. May the rain come to an end ... leave them with a rainbow's bend. Warm their days with golden rays of Sister Sun, Mister Moon will light the night when day is done.  Congrats on your milestone my sweet Sy-babes. Who knew Randy could count so high LOL just think...thats 20000 *winkies*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you love and who knew Randy could count so high. I'm sure he found it in the sky. O'er the rainbows where butterflies fly. And perhaps a moth or two. WWRS |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Like a brave warrior you show such braveness and valor.Letting us see the insight to a powerful yet lovely piece.You awe me. Crystal |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Now if there were ever a sweeter man under a raindrop, I don't remember who it was. Congratulations on passing 20,000 Sy Thank you most of all for the learning experience you give us in your wonderful poetry. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (09-05-2003 12:15 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy...I'm a sucker for a good storm and I love the way you write one. Very cool, my friend...and now, I wish you a day filled with the warmth of sun, and all that makes you smile. Congrats on your milestone, Sy.. "Deep inside this armor, the warrior is a child." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Crystal, Thank you for the sweet reply. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes Thank you love and may the sun shine on you throughout your days. Sharon, And I love you too. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Last night I watched a storm... today I read one through your words. This is wonderful, my friend. *S* It’s then I fantasize in sighs The wonder of your voice and eyes And then this... turns my thoughts to the sunshine of my heart... and leaves me applauding. *S* Congratulations on your milestone... I'm looking forward to your next 20000! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love a sweet reply. |
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