Open Poetry #28 |
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Land of Forevermore |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light ![]() |
+*+*+ In ancient forest on distant shore, I found the Land of Forevermore. Rainbows arched blue skies by day. At night stars shone past Milky Way. All life was Light in vibrant hues. Into all things, this Light infused. Where everyone, from muse to sage, enjoyed sweet youth and did not age. Maidens rode white unicorns, among red roses that beared not thorns. The elves and fairies, gnomes and sprites, would trill and traipse throughout the nights. Fresh floral scents filled morning air. Petals, garlands, strewn everywhere. The haunting sounds of wood Pan flutes, harmonized with fine stringed lutes. Sweet laughter rang through glen and derry, in land of mirth where all made merry. In ancient forest, on distant shore, I found the Land of Forevermore. +*+*+ |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
i want to go too !!!!! where's it at? oh yea "In ancient forest, on distant shore, I found the Land of Forevermore." enjoyed bernie ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (09-05-2003 12:47 AM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Earth Angel, what a fantastic place you've sent me to for my nighttime dreamland! Thank you, I can relax and dream now. Hope to see you there! "All life was Light in vibrant hues. Into all things, this Light infused." Love it. ~K~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Oh Dear Earth Angel please wing me to land of enchantment, absolutely terrific,, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Yay! Oh Linda, I so often have dreams of such gorgeous places like this, with unicorns going down Jolly Rancher rainbows and faeries and mermaids and children with colorful costumes on dancing to tropical music and oceans foaming like bubble baths! (kiss on cheek) Your fantasies bring smiles to all our faces, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Great imagery.........Vibrant wording. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EarthyAngel~ This is about as lovely as it comes~ Lovely flow ... I love forevermore's *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, I'm begining to think there is more than one of these places. It's either that or many entrances. Loved your write. ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sweet laughter rang through glen and derry, in land of mirth where all made merry. In ancient forest, on distant shore, I found the Land of Forevermore Oh Linda Lou, I love this land of forevermore. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I'm back to check it into my library. Off I go to my work day in the Land of Forevermore! xo ~K~ |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
It is a beautiful place, Linda. Thank you for bringing us there with your poem, and for bringing dreams of what will someday really be! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson [This message has been edited by El_Campeador (09-05-2003 09:30 AM).] |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
a very rythemic poem |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I am there! Show me the way.. Susan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bernie ~ I shall take you there when the moon is full and the stars are in perfect alignment! ![]() ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kahlil ~ I hope your dreams were as enchanting as you yourself are! ![]() ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
QjQ ~ Than-Q! Hop aboard! My wings are fluffed and ready! ![]() ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ You dream in technicolour as do I! That certainly makes for glorious and vivid dreamscapes! ![]() Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
MERCURY ~ Those are words a poet loves to hear!--and read! ![]() ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge ~ Dear poetess, are you not from the Land of Forevermore? ![]() Love & Starlights, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Yes, there are more of these Shangri-Las. I personally know of four of them!--and there are several portals to each one! ![]() Keep an open mind and heart and I could open many worlds for you, Dear One! ![]() Angel hugs and kisses forevermore, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ If you don't know how to astral travel, I could show you how!--then you could join me in my nightly journeys! Actually, I prefer travelling in the higher planes but that may be too difficult for a beginner flyer! The astral level can be a bit scary at times, but I'll protect you! I wouldn't want to be on the receiving end of Gary's wrath if anything were to happen to his precious red rose! lol ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kahlil ~ I love it when a reader deems a poem of mine a ![]() ![]() Thanks for stopping by again! I hope you have a good day at work--and may your night be even better! lol Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
El_C ~ Dear Ben, would you believe me if I were to tell you that your body didn't have to die for you to be able to visit these magical places? ![]() Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ambrish ~ Hi, there! Welcome to Passions! I suppose my poetry is "rhythmic" due to my musical background. I've got the music in me!--and it flows (hopefully!) into my writing! Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan ~ You would make a lovely nighttime traveling companion! ![]() Lovin' hugs, EA |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Where everyone, from muse to sage, enjoyed sweet youth and did not age. Show me the way and sign me up for citizenship. *G* This is lovely, EA... I greatly enjoyed! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Oh please, oh please grant me access to this wonderful place..hehehehe This is absolutely beautiful.The smoothness of the flow, the imagery in your words, the heart from you which I feel in this, and the inspiration to your soul that shines everysobright.You my lady have take me breath away. ![]() Crystal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
suthern ~ Your sense of humour is so ding dang darn delightful! ![]() Hop aboard one of Earth Angel Winged Flights and I will fly you there personally! --my payment will be seeing the joy on your pretty face! ![]() EA |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
i want my appointment toooooooo bernie ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
angelblueyes ~ I will most definitely take you there! Fluff your wings, dear Angel With The Blue Eyes! The planets will be in perfect alignment this summer's night. Crystal, you will shine even more brightly there than you do on the Earthly realm! ![]() Fly free, fly high! ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bernie ~ I hope you are not afraid of heights or wide open spaces! Acrophobia and agoraphobia would cause you to be in a considerable state of discomfiture if you were to fly with me. --No matter, even if you suffered from these conditions, I could cure you of them and you would be able to travel the galaxies with me! Tonight's the night! I'll come for you when you are sleeping... ![]() Don't have any alcohol before retiring! It would not be safe if you were to drink and fly! lol See you in mid of night! EA |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
This is so cool! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Yipeee! Let me just grab my toothbrush and I'm on my way!!!! What a fun and fanciful poem. Love it so much! ![]() Huggles and Giggles, Marti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JMK ~ --cool! Thanks! ![]() ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti ~ Just bring yourself! I'll supply everything! We'll have a blast and a half! We're setting sail tonight! ![]() I'm taking everyone to my absolute favorite land of enchantment! It'll blow your mind! lol Huggles 'n giggles to you as well! Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
can i go too? i've been ready and waiting all my life............. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
may i come along too ? i've been waiting my whole life...... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Inkedgoddess ~ Since you are a goddess, you truly do know where to go to find these places of enchantment. It is just that this Earthly experience has dulled your memory! I'd love for you to join me and our fellow Pipsters for a night of joyful bliss in Shangri-La-La Land! ![]() Travel lightly! EA |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*buys a one way ticket* ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ceinwyn ~ lol I know what you mean, Kristen! The Land of Forevermore is a place that I like to visit--but I'd prefer living there indefinitely!--but, all in good time, all in good time... ![]() ![]() Linda |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
arrived an appointment was kept as i laid ther thoughts in awe dreams came to be the angel in you arrived flying high through the breeze while in deep of sleep places shown me always to keep upon the way to shores forevermore . . . bernie ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (09-06-2003 02:16 PM).] |
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noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
enjoyed. not quite sure what it was that i enjoyed maybe it was the mysticism running throughout the entire poem. thanks for the read. noah |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bernie ~ Your poetic response was a lovely and unexpected surprise! Thank you!--and you would be a wonderful astral traveling companion! ![]() ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
noah j ~ Perhaps it was the mysticism! lol ![]() ![]() EA |
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