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Open Poetry #28

I'll call him Jack

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-09-04 10:40 AM

You ask me for a name to this person
the one I've fallen for
I can't tell you who he really is
because what if it's nothing more
than just my imagination
His touch digs deep into me
I can't seem to resist his smile
and yet all I want is to flee
to run away from possible pain
I'll say this or that isn't true
that I don't want him
But I can't lie to you
I think I've fallen too hard
the ground seems to rise
to meet me and break me
and I can't continue with these lies
so maybe I should tell you a story
and I'll call him Jack

I don't know what I did wrong but the fae are after me now. Faeries can be so irritable.

GhostWriter_6
Member

since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

1 posted 2003-09-04 10:46 AM

very nyce piece... desscriptive and well writen.. nyce flow to it as well.. keep it up teen.....

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