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GhostWriter_6
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0 posted 2003-09-04 09:47 AM


PoEtIc PeRsOnAlItY

A.k.A.Stability

mentaly unstable and unable to sort my thoughts..a rolodex of multiple personalities
if i was to die today... my death would cause massive casualties
i choose the poetry format to keep my brain in tact
when im speaking to normal people.. my thoughts... they dont knwo how to react
opposites attract .. thats why im stuck with these extra people
who make my life..less leisure and more lethal
[edited by moderator] up off alcohol and drugs
waiting for my next buzz
reality can never be the way it once was
i go from caml and collective to depressed and disrespective
will i pull a way and reject my whole perspective
anger and aggrivation take the place of asprin and alcohol
life.. theres no penalty for early withdrawal
spending countless hours in showers
trying to wash away the impurities beneath my skin
but my pourous exterior refuses to let cleansing waters within
an allergic reaction to everything that surrounds me
anxiety
stress in every shapemodel and variety
when i write you can say im talking to myself
cause when theres no one else... i always have a blank page or a notebook on the shelf.......

.:*^°¤Gw®i†êr6¤°^*:.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-04-2003 10:53 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-09-04 09:53 AM


GhostWriter_6
WE all talk to ourselves, enjoyed the read.

GhostWriter_6
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2 posted 2003-09-04 10:43 AM


thanx for the feedback... i appreciate it
teenpoet
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3 posted 2003-09-04 10:43 AM


The only problem with talking to yourself is when you won't talk to others.  I talk to myself ALL the time.  And sadly enough sometimes I answer myself!  
Hope you can sort yourself out.

GhostWriter_6
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4 posted 2003-09-04 10:44 AM


^^ thanx for he feedback teen poet.... sometimes i just feel beside myself... lol
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-09-04 10:50 AM


I talk to myself as well. I love a captive audience!

--the problem is that I talk back!--and I can be my own worst critic! lol


EA

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-09-04 10:54 AM


Good to see you again, Ghost.  Do remember to watch the language in Open.  Thanks!
GhostWriter_6
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7 posted 2003-09-04 11:19 AM


^^ i apologise.. i forgot .. but thanx for the feedback.....
El_Campeador
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8 posted 2003-09-04 11:20 AM


My poetry can be that way sometimes, too-an anchor to hold me down when things get tough.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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9 posted 2003-09-04 11:27 AM


It is easier to talk in poetry for some people,
especially to say the things that are kept inside
the inner being.
Hugs  
Ethel

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