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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Liquid Silver I stand in awe in front of you spellbound by your vastness of blue I listen to your whispered tunes and I open my arms to take you in. Your song flows into my heart, I am compelled to savor your touch and softly I glide into your embrace weightless I float in your silkiness. Just you and me and the glittering sun! In silent adoration I murmur words of praise and you respond in softly caressing waves, making love to me, to my very essence. While the sun stretches to kiss you and me its waves of light form a magical bridge, liquid silver dances playfully around me, sparkles of delight reflect in my eyes. Liszt’s most romantic pages I hear the entire Universe seems to take part in Nature’s display of magnificence, of Divine orchestration I am aware. In this glorious hour of sacred connection my whole being vibrates, emitting love in currents of deep and blessed emotions, a merging of waves in mutual surrender. Immersed in your emerald transparency I absorb the fullness of life contained in you, when I leave I carry your melody within and those who will see me, will see you too. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Margherita, this is lovely! I posted a "Liquid Silver" poem a few months back - and was so pleased to see the title again, with a whole new poetic concept...your poetic vision never fails you...and never fails to please me! |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
this was beautiful...reminds me of how much i miss the ocean I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away, |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
excellenly expressed , the words and visions most beautiful I live minutes from the ocean and an forever inspired Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita You sing a beautiful poem.  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh my, his is magnificent. The picture nearly knocked me off my chair and I hope you don't mind, but I snagged it! Oops! Your writing is always a joy to read. Huggles, Marti |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Immersed in your emerald transparency I absorb the fullness of life contained in you, when I leave I carry your melody within and those who will see me, will see you too. I love the picture you posted, and the one you painted too. Fabulous poem Margherita~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ Simply stated ... this presentation took my breath away~ JUST LOVELY !!!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
that was an amazing poem. the picture was a nice touch.  ~bjw~ ~To see the world in a grain of sand |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Margherita . . . this reminds me of the Trinity . . . the essence of pure beauty you describe enlighten me please here: Liszt’s ? xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely done. James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
exquisite, and carried through throughout the whole piece with the picture above it, a work of art |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Margherita, this is absolutely stunning. When I can drop in I will definitely be looking for more of your work. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my poet friends, your comments give joyful impulses to my heart ..... already longing to be embraced again by the liquid silver! Dear Sue, Franz Liszt was a famous pianist and classical piano concert composer and I felt as if the little waves were playing his music ... http://www.d-vista.com/OTHER/franzliszt.html Love, Margherita |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is shimmering and stylish. And makes me long for the sea. Sandra |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is absolutely wonderful.The flow, the imagery, the words.All took my breath away. angelblueyes |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*takes a deep soothing breath* lovely If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
expressed beautifuly,,, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Liszt’s most romantic pages I hear the entire Universe seems to take part in Nature’s display of magnificence, of Divine orchestration I am aware. Simply beautiful with a lovely pic to match. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!  Oh Margherita, I'm so happy to be back and read your gorgeous poems again, sweet friend, I've missed the and I certainly have seen a lot of liquid silver and green in Ireland! (kiss on cheek) Killarney National Park had a whole bunch of it, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - very inspiring write, reminds me of the times I've spent near the ocean with all of it's splendor... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you my friends. It's so nice to find you visiting this page leaving such loving comments. Hugs and have a beautiful Sunday! Love, Margherita |
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