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bslicker
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0 posted 2003-09-04 01:16 AM



Atlantic Ocean’s Waves of Love
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laying upon the Atlantic
crashing waves covering our bodies
beach sand moving
with tides direction
stars glistening our love
though the darkness
showing the crest of waves
not a care of others
for we were
one in thought
no-one else there
upon the other edge
of the world miles away
wondering if another couple
was looking over
oceans way
with a ditto
imaging thoughts
Atlantic’s magical touch
oop’s honey !!!

  
        

there are others on the beach !!!!
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Bernie
        




A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker


[This message has been edited by bslicker (09-04-2003 08:54 AM).]

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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2003-09-04 01:48 AM


Oh, this is great....especially the ending!  Too many people have the same thing in mind, eh??  I like the idea of another couple across the ocean mirroring the scene...what a great write!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

bslicker
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2 posted 2003-09-04 01:55 AM


thanks Sunny One
Yep Labor Day 2003 weekend at Cocoa Beach Florida

Was a great weekend

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-09-04 02:06 AM


very romantic penning,,
enjoyed the read,,,

         


Nan
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4 posted 2003-09-04 08:05 AM


I bet there are no others anywhere on the whole Atlantic seaboard... This is kewl, Bernie...
LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-09-04 08:11 AM


now, this is the place I am everyday of my life, thank you my friend for this vision of paradise..your a lucky fella....
DarlingDeb
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6 posted 2003-09-04 09:48 AM


Romance is not dead!!!! More people need to realize this and take advantage of living in paradise!

Deb

Everyone has a "Special Angel" watching over them each day!

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