Atlantic Ocean’s Waves of Love

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Open Poetry #28

Atlantic Ocean’s Waves of Love

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

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0 posted 2003-09-04 01:16 AM

Atlantic Ocean’s Waves of Love
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laying upon the Atlantic
crashing waves covering our bodies
beach sand moving
with tides direction
stars glistening our love
though the darkness
showing the crest of waves
not a care of others
for we were
one in thought
no-one else there
upon the other edge
of the world miles away
wondering if another couple
was looking over
oceans way
with a ditto
imaging thoughts
Atlantic’s magical touch
oop’s honey !!!

there are others on the beach !!!!
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Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (09-04-2003 08:54 AM).]

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

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Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-09-04 01:48 AM

Oh, this is great....especially the ending! Too many people have the same thing in mind, eh?? I like the idea of another couple across the ocean mirroring the scene...what a great write! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

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2 posted 2003-09-04 01:55 AM

thanks Sunny One
Yep Labor Day 2003 weekend at Cocoa Beach Florida

Was a great weekend

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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3 posted 2003-09-04 02:06 AM

very romantic penning,,
enjoyed the read,,,

Nan

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4 posted 2003-09-04 08:05 AM

I bet there are no others anywhere on the whole Atlantic seaboard... This is kewl, Bernie...

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-09-04 08:11 AM

now, this is the place I am everyday of my life, thank you my friend for this vision of paradise..your a lucky fella....

DarlingDeb
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since 2003-08-28

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Harriman, Tn

6 posted 2003-09-04 09:48 AM

Romance is not dead!!!! More people need to realize this and take advantage of living in paradise!

Deb

Everyone has a "Special Angel" watching over them each day!

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