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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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0 posted 2003-09-04 12:42 PM


make my empty world go
away

tell me all the loving
things

you
used to say

take all this emptiness
away

and fill me with your
love

give me lots of kisses
and

hugs
to fill my empty world

tell me the words that
my

empty
ears are longing for

and fill me with your
sweet

romanticness



            

[This message has been edited by QjQ (09-04-2003 12:46 AM).]

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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-09-04 12:58 PM


Awwww...such a charm...that heart that's so willing to please....Your words are just wonderful...as they always are. Very sweet to read! for you, and your sweetie pie to share!


SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-04-2003 12:59 AM).]

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-09-04 01:05 AM


Glenn, this is really pretty.
I enjoyed reading.  
Hugs  
Ethel

bslicker
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3 posted 2003-09-04 01:56 AM


very nice sweet write

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2003-09-04 02:15 AM


It's so wonderful how loving words can turn an empty world into one filled with happiness. I really enjoyed this tender write, and know she will too!!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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5 posted 2003-09-04 05:40 AM


Your world will not ever be empty with so many loving words to share and a smile that you share with everyone.
See Ya
Bon-Bon

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2003-09-04 08:21 AM


well sir, I'll blow in my ear and I'll tell you anything, hehehheheh, just kidding....but...truth be known....you are an emerald and will never be alone, your poems have charmed many a heart, mind and soul...so, we're right there with you...everywhere you go....love to you my friend....
Dreamer@
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since 2003-04-13
Posts 38
Denmark
7 posted 2003-09-07 04:14 PM


Sometimes we see and feel sadnes even lonely ness in the words we write.

Your words kept the heart feeling, and the true words were read.

Smiles from Dreamer

Life is for mee to be !

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
8 posted 2003-09-07 05:24 PM


I knew I would like this one by the title you chose.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
9 posted 2003-09-07 05:59 PM


You will never be empty my friend, for you give of yourself completly and will recieve the same in return.
Crystal

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
10 posted 2003-09-07 06:10 PM


I gladly would my friend.

love n hugs.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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