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Open Poetry #28

Consequences

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-09-03 10:29 PM

the vile fumes of
your demise
smells like
hell has already
arrived.

melted flesh
broken wings
go with the flow
burn for your sins

new beginings
new ends you
find yourself
wishing how it
would be if you
just did the right
thing then.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-03 10:40 PM

feelings expressed well,,,

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2003-09-03 10:40 PM

thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

3 posted 2003-09-04 09:13 AM

Great imagery in your first paragraph. Great poem.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-09-04 01:16 PM

I enjoyed this!! Excellent writing..

Susan

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-09-04 06:46 PM

They can hurt for a long time...James

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