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Abe
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since 2003-05-28
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2003-09-03 06:46 PM



IT’S NINE TO ELEVEN

Two years of hurt and misery
That seems, like yesterday
To think, it still brings tears
At least, does me that way.

Can’t imagine, with a loved one
Or, even a close friend
Guess, I could be far removed
It wasn’t mine, who met their end.

But, in that days’ memory
A little bit of each loved soul
Adds their little, special bit
That, makes up, the whole.

A small piece of all Americans
And, all people who live free
Bring a little something, to it
To what, the rest, will see.

So, we must show resolve
Not, let them see us sway
Except, when our heads bow
For, those lost, that day.

Del "Abe" Jones
Nine days to eleven, 2003

Del "Abe" Jones

© Copyright 2003 Del - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-09-03 07:13 PM


This is a great write about that day and Americans as a whole.When I remember this I remember the bombing in OKC as well.It was great to see in both instances Americans standing together as one.Nicely done.
Crystal

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
2 posted 2003-09-04 10:45 AM


Nice write
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-09-04 12:20 PM


Abe~
Just beautiful ... and the day fast approaching when we will once again pause in tearful remember~

So touching is this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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LukeatNFFC
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since 2003-07-09
Posts 42
Nottingham, England
4 posted 2003-09-04 12:46 PM


Dont mean to be disreespectful or in any way offensive, but I prefer to try and forget that day. But then, being English, and young, it doesnt affect me as much.
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
5 posted 2003-09-04 12:49 PM


Nicely written Abe!

Susan

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