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Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-09-03 03:35 PM

Leave it all said the shadow
Deny trust laughed evil
No closeness sobbed a soul
Wrested breath aching sigh
Fitful sleep nothing nigh
Surround thought leftover pain
Everything lost nothing gained
Never never fame
Lost the game
Winnowing sighs
Into the dark
Orphans cried for access
Slumberers blinked an SOS
Wanderers fished the sky for signs
Lofty lights entered some sights
Souls were lost in the night

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-09-03 03:39 PM

Wow! Intense write here Paul!
Extremely well written!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes ~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-09-03 03:51 PM

Perhaps you should sleep with a night light on! I know I'm going to sleep with one on from now on! I don't want my soul lost in the shadows of the night!

Great write!

EA

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-09-03 03:52 PM

Paul~
I LOVE a good title ... a Welcome mat that bids me enter~

This is a great write~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-09-03 04:41 PM

Paul

Very emotive and filled with anxious images...almost like a bad dream. Well done!

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-03 07:57 PM

Almost like a nightmare, but full of intensity and very emotive.
Crystal

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2003-09-03 11:14 PM

Very strong emotions here Paul. I hope all is well with you.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-09-04 09:50 PM

(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I can understand this pain so very much and therefore embrace the night and go to bed late and sleep late into the morning! (sigh) I send many angel healing ugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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