Open Poetry #28 |
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In the Capital |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The river still flows by strong, But cherry blossoms are gone, Spring to summer and now fall Wiping memories from all. Political desires, Beneath domes and round spires, Society, government, Museums and monuments Fill the clean central broad streets Made for all the tourist feet. But while the halls hold talking And the street fills with walking The river continues on It’s flowing is never done. Gloom |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderful write and awareness....thank you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Professor! As you know, I love to read your observances and little snippets of the world as seen through your eyes. You give life and meaning to what most people give only cursory glances or see not at all. You look for the deeper meaning. You open our eyes and cause them to really see... ![]() This one was especially moving. Lovin' hugs, EA |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Lee J Pleased you enjoyed. Thank you, Earth Angel, This is an inspiration poem, from my early morning reading And reflections of the past. The inspiration was from Cui Hao [ Ts’ui Hao] (670 – 727) “PASSING THROUGH HUAYIN” which was a capital during his time. I drive through the middle of Washington DC every week. You are always so kind in your response. Gloom |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a wonderful write Gloom! You took me right 'there' with your fantastic imagery. ~Morning Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was perfect!! Susan |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was good.You picked me up and put me right there. ![]() Crystal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you, Professor for the thoughtful explanation. I think it is wonderful that you read books such as those. ![]() ![]() EA |
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