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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2003-09-02 11:13 PM

I dream
Jamaica & you

Our music, citrus kisses
My hips, your hot response

Tangerine sun caressing
Everything

Was I asleep in beauty?
Or were you beauty in my
Sleep?

I gasp,
Then grasp...

Exotic is where ever
You take me...

~Tier

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

1 posted 2003-09-02 11:24 PM

"exotic is wherever you take me"

Excellent!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2003-09-02 11:28 PM

Love every single line Tier... wonderful writing

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-09-03 08:58 AM

very warm and inviting, Tiers

M

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-09-03 09:20 AM

Tier, it's been awhile.
Welcome home!

The poem...while the color is hard to read,
in highlighting it,
I found the beauty.

Thank you!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-09-03 09:38 AM

"Was I asleep in beauty?
Or were you beauty in my
Sleep?"

~ and that is the question!

Dreamily exotic!

EA

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2003-09-03 10:10 AM

A tangerine dream

Lovely!

Ed

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2003-09-03 10:37 AM

Tiers,
there are no words to describe the feeling of warmth that came from this piece.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-09-03 11:00 AM

ahh and he who takes you there . . .
allows you take us, as well
beautiful Tier
(MY EYEEEES)
*smile* I'm kidding
silly mood
Beautiful writing
xxoo

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

9 posted 2003-09-03 02:54 PM

Thanks everyone! You all inspire me, never forget that. *smiling*

And...

Sorry about the color! I didn't realize it would be sooo....

Well, like LittleWing said and I quote:

(MY EYEEEES)

*chuckling*

~Tiers

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2003-09-03 03:25 PM

Beautiful words, Tier.

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

11 posted 2003-09-03 03:27 PM

Passionate, I loved this.

Jason

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

12 posted 2003-09-03 08:10 PM

This is so warm, beautiful, and full of such passion.Just like your heart and soul.

Crystal

Lady Godiva
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 35
at the bottom of your glass

13 posted 2003-09-04 10:40 AM

this was yummy...

I think I'm in a silly mood...I do apologize *licks her lips*

[This message has been edited by Lady Godiva (09-04-2003 11:06 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

14 posted 2003-09-04 01:42 PM

very nicely done my friend... very nice indeed.

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