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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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For years, I've known. Blessed moments, I've grown. You like it when I say, everything's going to be okay.. You find joy when I utter silent fine threads of comfort. But what have you done for me? Afterall, I have been there.. Thick and thin, out and in. Found the eclipse, this summer day enraptures in it.. little half-circles under the trees. Afternoon stars, we learn the constellations. He trusted in me, so why can't you? Hover 'round my orion, tighten the belt and suffocate the meaning behind the astrological sign that dives.. in and out.. like the thread of my words sewn on the jeans we wore. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, this is lovely, my friend, and full of yearning. I appreciated the summer images, and the feelings that I had when reading...well done! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hover 'round my orion, tighten the belt grins..witty, great us of images as always |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write n read,,, [This message has been edited by QjQ (08-05-2003 01:38 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Sunny - Wishing warmth in Autumn, how selfish of me.. I hate to watch the flowers die. Raph - Haven't heard from you in a couple days, thanks for the reply..  Q - Good to hear from you, friend.. Love your writes as well. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Afterall, I have been there.. Thick and thin, out and in. Don't I know that... *hugs* It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang, this is sad to me |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"For years, I've known." Oh yes, in our heart we almost always know but choose to ignore in hopes that we will be wrong...sigh...I haven't been wrong yet.. Kaoru, you write so beautifully. I have gotten in the habit of scanning the blue pages for your name..hoping.. Susan C. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is stunning! Eric |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Appeasing seems to prolong the inevitable doesn't it. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-05-2003 10:28 AM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is so, so very good!! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But what have you done for me? Afterall, I have been there.. Thick and thin, out and in. ~*~ So young... so wise. Did he ever answer? methinks not.  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
genius Meg. I am in awe  insanity is not a crime |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hover 'round my orion, tighten the belt and suffocate the meaning behind "the astrological sign that dives.. in and out.. like the thread of my words sewn on the jeans we wore." --You have a very special talent, Dear Kaoru!  Linda |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I like... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
You like it when I say, everything's going to be okay.. You find joy when I utter silent fine threads of comfort. But what have you done for me? Afterall, I have been there.. Thick and thin, out and in. Yeah, I know this one. It isn't much fun, but I seem to do it over and over again....  I don't reply to all your poems, but I DO read all the ones that I see, and I never regret it. Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... [This message has been edited by Kielo (08-06-2003 11:00 PM).] |
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