Open Poetry #28 |
My quiet companion |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Miss Emily my quiet companion. Shall you be the one that came, perhaps to be most like me... will you understand a Grandmother's quiet moods best? Are you to be the one to look into written wanderings, knowing the why? When you gaze into hazel eyes, will you follow their trail onto a new horizon? Might you pick up a pen early on, to scribble as you sit beside me, while we share our imaginations’ drifting, to take us places not yet visited. Look at you, come directly from castles in skies, a pure rainbow’s beginning, a gift from dancing clouds ~ a sprite that calmed thundering heads. Oh, yes, you will dance, to the music within your soul, a slight ballerina of word, fey of mind, and light of touch, inherently you will know of matters, perhaps without understanding why, from whispers received today. You shall follow the cursive lines, breathing new life into a spirit that has always ballooned with laughter… you will be the gold to light our days. For I see it in your smile and feel it in your hands. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-02-2003 07:08 PM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You may indeed feel all that you say, but I am seeing one little Miss Emily who definitely lives in your heart, in a wonderfully connected way. Yes she could indeed be the one! Lovely Gramma, and by the way, I can never get enough baby pictures so keep them coming. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (09-02-2003 07:27 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Look at you, come directly from castles in skies, a pure rainbow’s beginning, a gift from dancing clouds ~ a sprite that calmed thundering heads. Oh, yes, you will dance, to the music within your soul, a slight ballerina of word, fey of mind, and light of touch, inherently you will know of matters, perhaps without understanding why, from whispers received today." ============================================= Yes my dear friend.. Emily may just be the one.. to follow in her grandmother's footsteps. Why look at her hands?! Are they not the hands of a word-dancer? Perhaps..yes, perhaps Emily will be the one. ~Softly smiling at you m'friend~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ohhhh... My, how she does have your peaceful demeanor...Beautiful. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
She just stole my heart! I want to pick her up and kiss her to bits! Your spritely little muse is sure to amuse! She's adorable. I can see that Emily is thinking up a poem as she sleeps! I love the name Emily. Both my daughters said that if they have a daughter one day, they'd call her Emily. The race is on! lol Congratulations on your new grandaughter--and on such a fine poem! Loves & hugs to you both! Linda |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very loving penning and pic of one so cherished,, |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Such a heart-melting picture with words to match! Thanks for sharing this gem of joy! Shenachie |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Look at that contented face...an angel for sure...and perhaps one day a poet. I know she is certainly well loved by her grandmother. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nothing like new life to get the creative juices flowing |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well now...Miss Emily is already quite the charmer and I think by the quiet smile on her perfect face, she knows it too. Wonderful write Karilea for this pretty in pink blessing. hugs to you both, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I knew this would be perfect Karilea, just like little Emily. hugs and love you Sunshinygirl. Maree Oh and keeping it. fate is not just |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LOL! Enjoy the quiet while you can!! Beautiful.... |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"inherently you will know of matters, perhaps without understanding why, from whispers received today." I loved this whole piece Karilea ... just beautiful. The stanza above really captures my ponderings this morning ... wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit (... and what a beautiful young lady she is!) |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
This is lovely, Karilea. Miss Emily is off to a great start having the love of someone like you. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
fey of mind, and light of touch, inherently you will know of matters, perhaps without understanding why, from whispers received today. "All in good time" Sunshine, congratulations...what a beautiful charming baby....you have indeed been blessed. Thank you for sharing. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is truly a wonderful picture. Kit picked out the portion that I like the best! Wonderful phrasing. KJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh my! A gift. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you will be the gold to light our days. For I see it in your smile and feel it in your hands. She is precious... and this is delightful! *S* Perhaps, indeed... but you'll love her no matter what her choices. *S* |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Karilea, what a precious little pumpkin! I hope you will continue to share pictures with us as seeing babies is such a joy and one that I personally never get tired of!! She may well be the one. 'inherently you will know of matters, perhaps without understanding why, from whispers received today' Such beautiful thoughts and may she receive the gift. Huggles and luvs to you and your family, Marti |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
you always drop a poem that has me reading all the way through..... and the picture of the baby was so adorable.. reminds me of my kids when they were that age....... keep it up sunshine |
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