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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-09-02 07:07 PM



Miss Emily
my quiet companion.  

Shall you be the one that came,
perhaps to be most like me...
will you understand
a Grandmother's quiet moods best?  
Are you to be the one
to look into written wanderings,
knowing the why?

When you gaze into hazel eyes,
will you follow their trail onto a new
horizon?

Might you pick up a pen
early on, to scribble as you sit beside me,
while we share our imaginations’
drifting, to take us places
not yet visited.

Look at you, come directly
from castles in skies, a pure
rainbow’s beginning, a gift from dancing clouds ~
a sprite that calmed thundering heads.

Oh, yes, you will dance,
to the music within your soul,
a slight ballerina of word,

fey of mind, and light of touch,
inherently you will
know of matters,
perhaps without understanding why,
from whispers received today.

You shall follow the cursive
lines, breathing new life
into a spirit that has always ballooned
with laughter…
you will be the gold
to light our days.

For I see it in your smile
and feel it in your
hands.



[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-02-2003 07:08 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-02 07:24 PM


You may indeed feel all that you say, but I am seeing one little Miss Emily who definitely lives in your heart, in a wonderfully connected way.  Yes she could indeed be the one!  Lovely Gramma, and by the way, I can never get enough baby pictures so keep them coming.    

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (09-02-2003 07:27 PM).]

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2 posted 2003-09-02 07:24 PM


"Look at you, come directly
from castles in skies, a pure
rainbow’s beginning, a gift from dancing clouds ~
a sprite that calmed thundering heads.

Oh, yes, you will dance,
to the music within your soul,
a slight ballerina of word,

fey of mind, and light of touch,
inherently you will
know of matters,
perhaps without understanding why,
from whispers received today."
=============================================
Yes my dear friend..
Emily may just be the one..
to follow in her grandmother's footsteps.
Why look at her hands?!
Are they not the hands of a word-dancer?
Perhaps..yes, perhaps Emily will be the one.
~Softly smiling at you m'friend~

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2003-09-02 07:25 PM


Ohhhh...

My, how she does have your peaceful demeanor...Beautiful. TD

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-02 07:26 PM


She just stole my heart! I want to pick her up and kiss her to bits! Your spritely little muse is sure to amuse! She's adorable. I can see that Emily is thinking up a poem as she sleeps!

I love the name Emily. Both my daughters said that if they have a daughter one day, they'd call her Emily. The race is on! lol

Congratulations on your new grandaughter--and on such a fine poem!

Loves & hugs to you both!
Linda

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5 posted 2003-09-02 08:13 PM


very loving penning and pic of one so cherished,,

         


Bridget Shenachie
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6 posted 2003-09-02 08:30 PM


Such a heart-melting picture with words to match!  Thanks for sharing this gem of joy!

Shenachie

Martie
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7 posted 2003-09-02 08:49 PM


Karilea

Look at that contented face...an angel for sure...and perhaps one day a poet.  I know she is certainly well loved by her grandmother.  

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8 posted 2003-09-02 09:07 PM


Nothing like new life to get the creative juices flowing
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9 posted 2003-09-02 09:49 PM


Well now...Miss Emily is already quite the charmer and I think by the quiet smile on her perfect face, she knows it too.
Wonderful write Karilea for this pretty in pink blessing. hugs to you both, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

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10 posted 2003-09-03 12:11 PM


I knew this would be perfect Karilea, just like little Emily.

hugs and love you Sunshinygirl.

Maree

Oh and keeping it.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


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11 posted 2003-09-03 12:19 PM


LOL! Enjoy the quiet while you can!!

Beautiful....

Kit McCallum
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12 posted 2003-09-03 04:46 AM


"inherently you will
know of matters,
perhaps without understanding why,
from whispers received today."

I loved this whole piece Karilea ... just beautiful. The stanza above really captures my ponderings this morning ... wonderful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

(... and what a beautiful young lady she is!)

El_Campeador
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13 posted 2003-09-03 07:29 AM


This is lovely, Karilea. Miss Emily is off to a great start having the love of someone like you.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

LeeJ
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14 posted 2003-09-03 07:57 AM


fey of mind, and light of touch,
inherently you will
know of matters,
perhaps without understanding why,
from whispers received today.

"All in good time"


Sunshine, congratulations...what a beautiful charming baby....you have indeed been blessed.  Thank you for sharing.


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15 posted 2003-09-03 10:54 AM


This is truly a wonderful picture.  Kit picked out the portion that I like the best!  Wonderful phrasing.  KJ
Kethry
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16 posted 2003-09-03 11:02 AM


Oh my! A gift.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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17 posted 2003-09-04 09:58 AM


you will be the gold
to light our days.

For I see it in your smile
and feel it in your
hands.

She is precious... and this is delightful! *S* Perhaps, indeed... but you'll love her no matter what her choices. *S*

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18 posted 2003-09-04 10:04 AM


Oh Karilea, what a precious little pumpkin! I hope you will continue to share pictures with us as seeing babies is such a joy and one that I personally never get tired of!!

She may well be the one.
'inherently you will
know of matters,
perhaps without understanding why,
from whispers received today'


Such beautiful thoughts and may she receive the gift.

Huggles and luvs to you and your family, Marti

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19 posted 2003-09-04 10:08 AM


you always drop a poem that  has me reading all the way through..... and the picture of the baby was so adorable.. reminds me of my kids when they were that age....... keep it up sunshine
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