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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-09-02 09:56 AM





This Love, 'Tis One Love

To come
from darkness
into the light
as shadows lift
from the night
as peace settles
in and all is right
and love has crested
in eye's sight

In purple shadows of passions light

As the valley
below the mount
gives me shelter
I shall count
on the one true love
that I know of
in the lee of his heart
the words he imparts
this one love

In golden glow of passions might

So beneath the light
in water's fall
'neath rainbow high
God, my sigh
shall reach his ear
he shall hear
the want of me
'tis heavenly
this one love



© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-02 09:58 AM


nicely done K.... a bit of inspiration this long weekend I see...

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2 posted 2003-09-02 10:46 AM


Oh so beautiful Karilea!
Very much enjoyed today...very much!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-09-02 01:19 PM


Karilea:

yes a gift from God truly

As the valley
below the mount
gives me shelter
I shall count
on the one true love
that I know of
in the lee of his heart
the words he imparts
this one love

Just beautiful Lady
xxoo

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4 posted 2003-09-02 04:18 PM


So beneath the light
in water's fall
'neath rainbow high
God, my sigh
shall reach his ear
he shall hear
the want of me
'tis heavenly
this one love



Oh, Karilea, this is just so pretty!!
Is this a new form I don't know about?
I have been to Poetry challenge yet.
Hugs, sweet lady  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-09-02 04:32 PM


WOW...This is great work!
QjQ
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6 posted 2003-09-02 05:34 PM


beautiful write n pic..

         


kayjay
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7 posted 2003-09-02 05:38 PM


I feel and think and ponder
That whither I may wander
I'll not quite find the meanings
That echo in your gleamings

You are a joy to read.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-09-03 02:08 AM


Enjoyed...James
Sunnyone
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9 posted 2003-09-04 02:29 AM


Oh my, sun-sis, you are working magic with this one!!  How beautiful it is, and richly painted, a scene of peace and beauty, and the graphic is beautiful too.  It looks so inviting!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Patricia
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10 posted 2003-09-04 06:33 AM


Just had a moment to read before I get ready for work...so glad I did.  This is beautiful, Karilea.

Patricia

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