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Open Poetry #28

DeEvolution of Reality

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-09-02 09:07 AM

Stripping down reality
to the bone
subjective perspective
universalized packaging
for your enjoyment
take the red pill
follow the white rabbit
to the world beneath ideal
cogs in the machine
feeding political egos
giving false promises like candy
breeding apathy
forever moving in place
Only you can choose to be free
down the rabbit hole
fly with me
beware truth isn't pretty
with shiny bows
but its far better cry
then the societial slavery
we now live

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-09-02 09:13 AM

Extremely well written Dan!!

Susan

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-09-02 09:38 AM

thank you

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2003-09-02 01:21 PM

I think life has become about choices Brad, and trust me I truly do live my life, and follow no piper. I really enjoyed this one so much - I printed it out to remind me never to even think of working again!

I don't want to know where I am heading, it will spoil my journey.
Carpe' Diem

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