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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-09-01 11:14 PM

Fall into me
with my brown leaves
and golden shimmers
as I move in the breeze.

Crispness...
That cool snap
in the air
Sounds of Fall
Harvest time fair.

Harvest Moon
Autumns heavenly smile
Ingathering of grains
Crops that have grown
for a long while

Autumns colors,
paint for the eye.
Pinks, and oranges
painted across the sky.

Pumpkins of Orange
creatures gathering for winters bite
When bounty is no longer there
winters dawn, is in sight.

Fall in to me
The season Mother Nature
turns gold and reaps so refined
Nature sleeps
'neath snows confined.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-01 11:18 PM

what a beautiful image of fall in these words of poetry,,,

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-09-01 11:27 PM

Shara, Only someone with such true beauty and angelic spirit could make this flow,the color abound from the page, and the nature be felt from within.It is such beauty and such life that I see through your eyes.

Crystal

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-09-01 11:28 PM

Thanks Glenn...

What is so strange is I didn't even know there was a challenge about the seasons until after I read your challenge, after submitting this one. Funny how that happens to me sometimes. hehe

SharaRose @-->--

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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2003-09-01 11:32 PM

SharaRose - autumn is a most beautiful time, and this poem brings it forth in it's splendor...

BC

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-09-01 11:34 PM

Hi, Angelblueeyes....Thank you. You are so sweet to say these things. Bless ya bunches for that. I am glad you liked. Fall is my favorite time of year. This part of Texas is extremely hot, and humidity is awful so we look forward to the cool crispness in the air here in this neck of the woods...

SharaRose @-->--

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SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-09-01 11:37 PM

HI BC...

I just love it, too!!! I love this time of year coming our way so soon. Right around the corner.

SharaRose @-->--

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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-09-07 03:37 PM

Shara, I love the picture that you painted
with words in my minds eye with this one.
Isn't Autumn a beautiful, colorful season?
I love it, too. Autumn and Spring are my
favorite seasons.

Hugs

Ethel

SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-09-08 01:15 AM

Awww ..This is sweet of you. Thanks Ethel..bless ya bunches. I love this time of year. Where I live it's a VERY welcomed site to see cool weather coming our way.

girlie,
SharaRose @-->--

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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

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Pencilveinia, USA

9 posted 2003-09-08 06:36 PM

Fall into me
with my brown leaves
and golden shimmers
as I move in the breeze.

Gorgeous opening lines, made me want to read on....

Wonderfully written Shara, with warmth and beauty.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-09-08 07:13 PM

Very beautiful...fantastic imagery!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

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Florida

11 posted 2003-09-08 07:58 PM

Oh yes fall is in the air. Your lovely poem makes me long for more! Living in Florida I have to wait a while..

Deb

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

12 posted 2003-09-08 08:37 PM

SharaRose, your words are vivid and crisp and you've painted a picture that I just loved! Fall is such a great season, especially this one, as summer was sooo HOT!

Hugs, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

SharaRose
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Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

13 posted 2003-09-09 01:08 AM

Thanks to all of you..

to all

gemjop-- I am glad you wanted to read more. Nice to feel my words brought you to the feeling of wanting to read further. That was nice.

Enchantress--I am glad you liked.

BloomingRose--I know just what you mean. I live in a part of Texas that's on the same tropic line as Florida. We have alot the same climate as you. Hot hot hot, and more hot...I'm ready for the Fall...

NewEnglandLazurlu--Thank you for the critique of the words I used. I appreciate your thoughts of what my words brought you to.

Bless ya all bunches,
Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-09-2003 01:12 AM).]

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