Real Love.....for a boy from the hood

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Open Poetry #28

Real Love.....for a boy from the hood

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-01 09:25 PM

He stumbles on in
when alloted the time,
doesn't feel like a bard
though I'm digging his rhyme.

Does it for me,
as he calls me his squeeze,
from another in chains
always aiming to please.

Just wants to impress me,
not simply undress me,
writes to my heart,
as if to caress me.

More skilled on the fairway,
with a putter in his glove,
but when he fumbles with poetry
he shows me real love.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-01-2003 09:58 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-09-01 11:35 PM

inkedgoddess - I believe this is the first one I've read of yours with rhyming words. I like it, shows your many styles...

BC

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-09-01 11:37 PM

I like this side of you.Shows a certain playfulness to you

Crystal

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-09-01 11:38 PM

GRIN....

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-09-01 11:42 PM

Sooooo cute....

I love it!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-09-02 06:50 AM

thank you thank you
and yes, i am a playful girlygirl

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

6 posted 2003-09-02 07:45 AM

New style huh? How diverse. Enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-09-02 07:54 AM

inkedgoddess,
Well done enjoyed the read.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

8 posted 2003-09-02 08:01 AM

sweetttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-09-02 08:20 AM

Michele;

I do adore seeing you writing this way
it is quite beautiful and this:

Just wants to impress me,
not simply undress me,

is precious
*smile*
xxoo

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