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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US 
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that's it, i'm done who cares, i'm through i don't care anymore i've hardened my heart i'll cry not one more tear i'm tired of searching in all the wrong places for wishing and praying for a stupid ol' dream i started from the beginning believed the best in you gave all i had to give put myself aside too often thought you were what i wanted now i realize i'm the fool this could never really work you're a selfish person i give all i have so i give in and now you win i hope you're happy as a lark you got just what you wanted so good-bye hopes and dreams and all that goes with that crap Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ouch Hope next week will bring some sunshine and hope for you, Kristie. Meanwhile, keep reading and writing, and looking forward to new adventures. |
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Alnilam Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75 |
i really liked this. the free style really just helped make it so much more personal and poignant. i especially like the way you augmented then diminished the number of lines each stanza. it was really a wonderful read. makes me want to hug ya so  ~*Alnilam*~ |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Midnightsun-yeah this week kinda sucked. I hope you're right about next week! :-) A~you're a sweetie, thanks Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You know this week you feel all the pain and let downs, but next week you feel the healing and the new beginning.The next week is full of life, happiness, true heart, and spirited soul that I know is within you.May you shine and let not any man dim the light of you my friend Crystal |
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