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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-08-04 10:41 PM


Midnight moon

   I'm feeling alone
   a bit out of tune

   on my own


   show me a way
   I'll take it slow

   to another day
   without your glow


Midnight moon

   shine down on me
   heal my wound

   set my heart free


   I've feeling's of
   you, deep inside

   my midnight love ...

   for you I've cried

  

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-08-04 10:45 PM


well done
passing shadows
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gemjop
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3 posted 2003-08-05 01:57 PM


Craig, making me smile as ever, with your serene words.

I hope youre not feeling down.

this comforted me...the moon,it knows my every thought...and yep, i do end up talking to it..out loud...sometimes

into my library with this beauty

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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4 posted 2003-08-07 12:16 PM




sometimes with just simple words you touch the deep in all....


ME~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

ecrivan
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5 posted 2003-08-07 12:19 PM


that's right, sometimes simple words can say
much more than never ending ramblings..enjoyed Craig ..cheer up though!


angelblueyes
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6 posted 2003-08-07 12:59 PM


The simplest of words can bring the greatest peace.Smile my friend for you are an enchanted soul
angelblueyes

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2003-08-08 10:53 PM


Sadly, this.   Crying our tears can be cleansing, it's holding them back that hurts so bad.  This is such a heartfelt poem....and it is beautiful.

Be well, and be happy Craig~

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-08-09 01:34 PM


I've feeling's of
   you, deep inside

   my midnight love ...

   for you I've cried


Craig,
this is so sad, yet so beautifu.
I'm keeping this beauty, too.
Hugs,  
Ethel

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