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Tima's Challenge |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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The green of rebirth has died replaced with brown's sigh The flowers bloom has closed and tomorrow's hue is gold Summer passes to fall and earth winds call For a time of rest and whispered beginnings next test |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
thoughts of Fall...it's funny, but I was just standing outside thinking of how there is a different feel in the air now, and it seems to have happened overnight. Much enjoyed this challenge...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
There are times, I admit, that I miss the more significant changes of the season of home..Florida just doesn't do it justice. Thank you for reading! Susan |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Not YET!!! PuhleeeZZZZEEEEEE! It's been in the sixties and raining here all weekend... arrghh.. add that to the fogs that started rolling in in July and you got -- yikes -- a very nasty winter coming! I got a change of season for you right here...!! But I know what you mean Susan -- when I was down Hattiesburg way there wasn't much change either.. just doesn't feel right for it to be 70 degrees and sunny for Christmas does it? Nice pome though -- I'm going to have to catch up on your chapter's here soon! |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Thank you Susan for doing the challenge, and you done it well ladybug! This was beautiful. I love fall too! I agree with Sunnyone about the air changing over night! Come on winter I say, I'm here in SC and it's hot as heck, and the humidity is thick as mollases! Great write, and much enjoyed! ...hey Reb...send some of that cold stuff thissa way! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
love it! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was great.The way you bring fall to life is an attraction worth viewing.Challenge well met my friend.  Crystal |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Reb~I grew up in N. Indiana so I know what you mean. But I have been in Florida for 9 yrs and I do miss fall up North. Tell ya what..you come down here for the winter, and I will come up there for the fall! It's a plan! (I don't eat much!) Tima~Thank you. I hadn't planned on doing this challenge as I don't do anything that doesn't involve human suffering well...lol..but it just came out. Dan~Thank you! How is the weather in Ga?? Crystal~ You always say the sweetest things..Thank you for reading! Susan |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Nicely done... Ed |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Why..thank you Ed! Susan |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful Susan . . . this reminded me of "Nothing Gold Can Stay" *smile* well met indeed xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, Susan. Challenge well-met!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
humid |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Rain is good.. I always thought the upper 30's was short weather. Great poem, Susan, well met! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice expressions penned,,, |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I love Autumn; it is almost orgasmic in the riot of colors and the unapologetic edge to the wind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This was lovely, Susan. You expressed the seasonal transitions so eloquently.  Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you everyone! LOL@Icy Susan |
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