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Tonight Love |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tonight Love ~*Marge Tindal*~  Tonight love .. while the stars softly play Waltz my heart to Jupiter across the Milky Way Around the moon in shimmer, 'til the night makes day Dance me darling, dance me darling .. in soft poetic sway~ Ease me into arms of love while the night is yet carefree Encircle me close and ever so tender engaging ardent reverie Trail endearing kisses across these lips-find sweet foreverly Come my love .. come sweet love .. night plays our melody~ Come dance this dance with me Tonight love ... tonight~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (09-01-2003 12:59 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...So beautifully romantic....he better be listening!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I'll be right over.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sis~ Oh ... he is~ AND *grinning*  Seymour~ If I were to get no further replies ... I'd still be smiling~ Love you dear sir~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Marge, This is beautiful...everything about this verse whispers love. Patricia |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: There should be romantic music with this one! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Alnilam Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75 |
This is a beautiful poem. Obviously for someone equally as beautiful in your heart. Wonderful to read, and Im sure enjoyable to write. I loved it! Thanks for the read. ~*Alnilam*~ |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
reminds me of a song the music box used to play. until I broke it  beautifull  insanity is not a crime |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beauty, tenderness... and soft promise all wrapped up in Marge-song-of-heart... this is wonderful! *S* |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Marge, Your song is full of such beauty,tenderness, and sweetness that he better be paying attention or else You my sweet lady friend soothe the unsettled spirit of even the deepest pain Crystal |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Patricia~ Thank you lady~ BettyLou~ *grinning* at you ... he plays the music AND SINGS~ It's a beautiful serenade~ Alnilam~ Thank you so much for the nice comments~ And welcome to Passions~ Wind~ Thank you. And ironically, I collect music boxes~ SweetSuthernGal~ Awwww, you are such a sweetheart~  Crystal~ Always ... always, I appreciate your thoughts~ Thank you sweetie~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you so much for making sure I didn't miss this romantic display of poetry at its finest. Lovely, touching and about as perfectly beautiful as they come |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HootieGal~ Your reply means the world to me~ Thank you ... and you got me started writing these preciously tender moments ... way back when~ I thank you dear lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
So very beautiful Marge and so very much enjoyed. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Allright, tonight...James |
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heartpiper Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 57 |
This is beautiful Thanks for bringing this flow of emotions here Iyad |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Well, Marge...you had to know this one would get my attention, since you might remember the one I wrote by the same title. Nice to see the 'dance' back in your pen. This is beautiful. Hugs, ~Vicky "Deep inside this armour, the warrior is a child." |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So pretty...  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Thank you so very much~ JamesMichael~ *hugs* HeartPiper~ Thanks for such a lovely reply~ Vicky~ Why of course I remember ... it's one of my personal *gift* favorites~ This one flowed from a dancing heart~ The dance is, and always will be, just a romantic quill away~ SharaRose~ Thank you~ *Huglets* all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Absolutely beautiful. Betty |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A marvellous, mellifluous, melody of love...  Linda |
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