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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-09-01 12:53 PM



Tonight Love
~*Marge Tindal*~
    
Tonight love .. while the stars softly play
Waltz my heart to Jupiter across the Milky Way
Around the moon in shimmer, 'til the night makes day
Dance me darling, dance me darling .. in soft poetic sway~

Ease me into arms of love while the night is yet carefree
Encircle me close and ever so tender engaging ardent reverie
Trail endearing kisses across these lips-find sweet foreverly
Come my love .. come sweet love .. night plays our melody~

Come dance this dance with me
Tonight love ... tonight~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Martie
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1 posted 2003-09-01 12:55 PM


Marge/sis...So beautifully romantic....he better be listening!  
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2 posted 2003-09-01 01:36 PM


Marge,
I'll be right over.

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3 posted 2003-09-01 01:42 PM


Sis~
Oh ... he is~
AND *grinning*

Seymour~
If I were to get no further replies ...
I'd still be smiling~
Love you dear sir~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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4 posted 2003-09-01 04:40 PM


Marge,

This is beautiful...everything about this verse whispers love.

Patricia

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5 posted 2003-09-01 07:45 PM


Dear Marge:  There should be romantic music with this one!

Love
Betty Lou

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6 posted 2003-09-01 07:59 PM


This is a beautiful poem. Obviously for someone equally as beautiful in your heart. Wonderful to read, and Im sure enjoyable to write. I loved it! Thanks for the read.

~*Alnilam*~
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7 posted 2003-09-01 08:01 PM


reminds me of a song the music box used to play. until I broke it beautifull

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8 posted 2003-09-01 09:03 PM


Beauty, tenderness... and soft promise all wrapped up in Marge-song-of-heart... this is wonderful! *S*
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9 posted 2003-09-02 12:27 PM


Marge, Your song is full of such beauty,tenderness, and sweetness that he better be paying attention or else You my sweet lady friend soothe the unsettled spirit of even the deepest pain
Crystal

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10 posted 2003-09-02 09:28 AM


Patricia~
Thank you lady~

BettyLou~
*grinning* at you ... he plays the music AND SINGS~
It's a beautiful serenade~

Alnilam~
Thank you so much for the nice comments~
And welcome to Passions~

Wind~
Thank you.  And ironically, I collect music boxes~

SweetSuthernGal~
Awwww, you are such a sweetheart~

Crystal~
Always ... always, I appreciate your thoughts~
Thank you sweetie~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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11 posted 2003-09-02 08:07 PM


Thank you so much for making sure I didn't miss this romantic display of poetry at its finest. Lovely, touching and about as perfectly beautiful as they come
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12 posted 2003-09-02 08:50 PM


HootieGal~
Your reply means the world to me~
Thank you ... and you got me started writing these preciously tender moments ... way back when~
I thank you dear lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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13 posted 2003-09-02 09:18 PM


So very beautiful Marge and so very much enjoyed.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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14 posted 2003-09-03 02:16 AM


Allright, tonight...James
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15 posted 2003-09-03 02:54 AM


This is beautiful
Thanks for bringing this flow of emotions here
Iyad

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16 posted 2003-09-03 03:00 AM



Well, Marge...you had to know this one would
get my attention, since you might remember
the one I wrote by the same title.

Nice to see the 'dance' back in your pen.
This is beautiful.
Hugs,
~Vicky

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17 posted 2003-09-03 04:57 AM


So pretty...

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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18 posted 2003-09-03 09:29 AM


SueTang~
Thank you so very much~

JamesMichael~
*hugs*

HeartPiper~
Thanks for such a lovely reply~

Vicky~
Why of course I remember ... it's one of my personal *gift* favorites~

This one flowed from a dancing heart~
The dance is, and always will be, just a romantic quill away~

SharaRose~
Thank you~

*Huglets* all~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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19 posted 2003-09-03 11:49 AM


Absolutely beautiful.
Betty

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20 posted 2003-09-03 12:09 PM


A marvellous, mellifluous, melody of love...


Linda

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