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Open Poetry #28

Greening In Spring

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-09-01 10:58 AM

Great splashes of herbies,
And woodies
Foaming verdant
At the feet of tall waves
That crash up,
Rolling mountain sides.
(After long retreat)
*
Cloud shades
Darken hill-tops
Of jade-swells
Rising up,
From pillows of olive
And emerald green.
*
Do these tints
(I question)
Why,
This tide ebbing art
Like wide stretching,
Seas, paint
(Romantic in spring)
Such beauty on my brain?....

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-09-01 11:01 AM

ice . . . you have painted me a landscape
beautiful
xxoo

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-09-01 11:31 AM

ice

"Do these tints
(I question)
Why,
This tide ebbing art
Like wide stretching,
Seas, paint
(Romantic in spring)
Such beauty on my brain?...."

I think you answered your own question with the beauty of this poem.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2003-09-01 06:36 PM

came back to add to libary.

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2003-09-01 07:23 PM

Beautiful simply beautiful ice.
Of course you know I'll love it.

:-)

Ribbit

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

5 posted 2003-09-10 12:21 PM

Hi ice...Darkpoetry here. Just read your poem. Great one my friend. Keep up the work. See you in chat when I can next pop in for a visit. KRM

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