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In Shadows Trace
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In Shadows Trace |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“IN SHADOWS TRACE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ In dark of the moon in nights calm, our lips touch in gentler longing, desires felt are of passions each, and a loves taste is of its soothing… A song plays of melodies in harmony, chords heard within are ones to nurture, a softer twilight is when you’re close, your skin warms and leaves me weaker… Silhouettes touch in clouds of mist, as they dance together on candle shades, sensitive caresses start of the fire, cutting into within, of loves sharp blades… Your bosom rises in anticipations well, beckoning satin is of your deeper embrace, darkness is light for within is you, and a breath sighs in shadows trace… ~~~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Silhouettes touch in clouds of mist, as they dance together on candle shades,"... ~ Oh, yesssss!   EA |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Your shadows are different from mine, But I do enjoy how you have describe them here. Well done and enjoyable Gloom |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill...Enjoyed the read. You've got to take it easy on these ladies here at PIP, after reading this their hearts will flutter. LOL...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful Bill. I have heard your song...and it is anyone's delight...maybe some day again~~ M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Charles...did it just get very warm in here?  Don't you dare deny it! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good penning,,, |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...WOW!!!! Fantastic poem of Love's yearning and Love's desired fulfillment. Loved your poem. It was very romantic, very sultry and seductive.***Ivy Rose |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly written Bill. Eric |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ I knew from the title that I would LOVE it ... and I DO~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill: beautiful, priceless lines darkness is light for within is you, and a breath sighs in shadows trace… passionate, as always xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bill~ Lovely! Susan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Your bosom rises in anticipations well, beckoning satin is of your deeper embrace, liked these lines very much, very sensous and image filled poetry as always, bill |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I have to say your shadows are much more enjoyable than mine.Even in your shadows I find the true romaticism of your heart.  Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, sweet friend, silhouettes are so spellbinding and I just find it magical playing hide-and-seek with them in joy, as there are so many treasures and smiles to find! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, sweet friend, all so magical, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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