sadness ( a try at a cinquain)

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sadness ( a try at a cinquain)

kaleanna
Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 89
TX, USA

0 posted 2003-08-31 04:54 PM

Sadness
crying tears
falling, streaming, hurting
brokenhearted cause lost love
sorrow

Meesh

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-08-31 05:41 PM

Beautiful Meesh , have always wanted to try a cinquain
(I read it is 2,4,6,8,2)
and please correct me if not
I am just learning . . .
Take a bow . . . *applause*
*smile*
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (08-31-2003 05:42 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-08-31 05:48 PM

kaleanna - a good write for your first cinquain...

BC

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