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kaleanna
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0 posted 2003-08-31 01:20 PM



Silence so loud that the
Crying is not heard, still
Reeling from the harsh words
Eyes tearfully searching for
Arms that are not there
Maybe the time has come to let go

Meesh

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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-08-31 01:24 PM


Well...I love it!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

kaleanna
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2 posted 2003-08-31 02:11 PM


ty Chris

Meesh

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3 posted 2003-09-02 01:26 PM


sure sounds like time to scream, or even a scream, to me. I like this alot, well done.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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