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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-30 10:23 PM


Clayware

in your spinning
if you
have time
whisper me
call my name
wheel me
there
take me
where
I can
mold
like clay
in a sweet
potter’s lullaby
gentle strength
touching soft
wet earth
crafted in
fire


"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2003-08-30 10:42 PM


oh yes, the scene in "Ghost"
and what happened to patrick swayze's looks?
anyhow, good stuff once again, with heart

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-08-31 01:57 AM


Helen, I especially liked this first part.....

in your spinning
if you
have time
whisper me
call my name


and all the rest of it, too...
Hugs  
Ethel

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
3 posted 2003-08-31 01:59 AM



Helen...once again, you amaze me...simply wonderful.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
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Sitting in Michael's Lap
4 posted 2003-08-31 02:04 AM


in your spinning
if you
have time
whisper me


Quiet, sincere, lovely.

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2003-08-31 02:09 AM


you have created..
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