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kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
first one Like the child's eyes sparkle the stars twinkle High in the night sky second one Playful sounds calling i find myself answering like a child, playing Meesh [This message has been edited by kaleanna (08-30-2003 11:43 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nce senryus, kaleanna! Senryus have many themes, haikus traditionally have a nature theme. Both tend to go in 5-7-5 format, though I've seen them in other syllable formats. I really enjoy this short poetic form, and am happy to read so many others attempting this style.  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
haiku is 5 7 5 syllables and pertains to something of nature. example of haiku fresh and beautiful are wildflowers however they are seasonal senryu is 5 7 5 and can relate to any subject as your # 2 is very good,,, |
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