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NewAgePaladin
Junior Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 11
New Jersey

0 posted 2003-08-30 06:25 PM




~All are born to observe order, but few are born to establish it~

*Picture of NewAgePaladinby Russian Painter Margarita aka "Reineke".


"Reineke"
If you take my heart,
Be it not today.
For it is apon your love,
On which i prey.
Hold me now,
As i held you then.
We shall fall in love,
Again and again.
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" My Forever"
Without you i would wander,
This desolate world alone.
Forever i would ponder,
Shall i ever find a home?
Nowi have you in my arms,
And completely in my heart.
Your love ill take, A home we'll make.
I pray we never part.
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"The Shadow Within"
My beauty arise,
With sapphire eyes.
And a shadow beyond surrounding.
Answer my plee,
And soon may i see.
A princess to be,
Astounding.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-30-2003 06:34 PM).]

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-08-30 08:15 PM


These are very good. I've not read your work before but I hope to see more of it. One small nitpick though "Plee" should be spelt "plea" unless you mean something else.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Nicole
Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
2 posted 2003-08-30 11:33 PM


Welcome to Pip, this is the first I've read of you, but I'll look out for you in the future.  Much enjoyed!
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