Open Poetry #28 |
A Few Short Poems |
NewAgePaladin Junior Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 11New Jersey |
~All are born to observe order, but few are born to establish it~ *Picture of NewAgePaladinby Russian Painter Margarita aka "Reineke". "Reineke" If you take my heart, Be it not today. For it is apon your love, On which i prey. Hold me now, As i held you then. We shall fall in love, Again and again. --------------------- " My Forever" Without you i would wander, This desolate world alone. Forever i would ponder, Shall i ever find a home? Nowi have you in my arms, And completely in my heart. Your love ill take, A home we'll make. I pray we never part. --------------------- "The Shadow Within" My beauty arise, With sapphire eyes. And a shadow beyond surrounding. Answer my plee, And soon may i see. A princess to be, Astounding. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-30-2003 06:34 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
These are very good. I've not read your work before but I hope to see more of it. One small nitpick though "Plee" should be spelt "plea" unless you mean something else. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Welcome to Pip, this is the first I've read of you, but I'll look out for you in the future. Much enjoyed! |
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