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NewAgePaladin
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0 posted 2003-08-30 02:11 PM


"A Wizards Plee"
Darkness cold the day does burn,
Within my slumber I toss and turn.
Widdled away with nothing to fear,
Dare i shed a single tear.
Spirit i hope you hear my plee,
Place within which needs to be.
Her love i need for this i know,
My love to her persists to grow.
Foolish eyes can barely see,
How much her love does mean me.
And so i wait for her reply,
If answered not i will not die.
For then i know the lesson be,
Tis but my curse the law of three.



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1 posted 2003-08-30 02:13 PM


love the flow here...

and this....

"Foolish eyes can barely see,
How much her love does mean me."



jade dragoness
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2 posted 2003-08-30 02:57 PM


I'm going to watch for more posts from your pen. I really enjoyed this one.
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-08-30 09:29 PM


I have never thought of a wizard as vulnerable.

smile.

Thank you for this,a peek at a private moment--

fascinating and SWEET.

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4 posted 2003-08-30 09:32 PM


Blessed Be m'friend!
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