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Open Poetry #28

Brown Leaves Of Time.

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

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0 posted 2003-08-30 06:10 AM

Softly, gently silent, the brown lifeless leaf fell, a metaphor of our lives.

So much promise, when we first bud forth into an uncertain world.
Vigorously growing and flourishing in every weather, rain or shine.

But time ticks, as seasons move apace, so the slow inevitable deacy of age, silently sets in.

Bravely we deny the inevitable,holding fast to the last, until the final gust sends us flying in the wind.

Laid to earth, we deacy further,life extinguished, feelings gone, we return to our basic level.

Now a whisper on the wind, a wash of a wave, a rumour down the decades of time....

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

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Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2003-08-30 06:14 AM

My love this was awesome, moving....so much wisdom in such a short piece...I love your comparison to leaves and humans! greatly done!!!!! One of my favorites~~~~

xxxxx love ~ARH

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

2 posted 2003-08-30 06:20 AM

Thank you for the very kind and encouraging words my love..the poem was written in autumn a few years ago and i dug it out to share on pip...glad you enjoyed it...love..

Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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