To Rise Once Again (inkedgoddess & Bill Charles)

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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-08-29 09:40 PM

“TO RISE ONCE AGAIN”
by inkedgoddess & Bill Charles
~~~~
The fallen goddess is waiting, she is
beneath a moon its shadow now,
yearning his eternal kiss to awaken her,
cast inside this earthly slumber, weary
of the chains that bind her, can you
rise above mere words of poetic
pageantry my poetic knight,
release her if only for some momentary
flight, can she rise again through
wisdoms touch, acquired
of your own once burdens…
~~~~
Once in a lifetime a lover will enter to
unlock the essence of your spirit,
a silhouette of you secluded in
twilight of mist longing to taste a kiss
of tenderness surrounded by desires want,
to again open your eyes to one with yearning,
yet my words of a chivalrous pen will stir you
ever more in rhyme, your heart will
beat and flow with passions wake, cherishing
a touch of loving desire to set free
trails and tribulations that bind, as I
whisper of plights past and futures pleasure,
teaching of pain lost and loves enchantment,
and then you will wake to rise once again…
~~~~

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-08-29 09:43 PM

Wow...like the presentation of this. Very different for both of you.
Always a great combination. TD

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-08-29 10:46 PM

terrific literary genre penned by both,,,

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2003-08-30 12:03 PM

It takes the blending of two incredibly talented hearts to give rise to words that flow around the reader and touch them with the senual feel of your thoughts. MAGNIFICENT!!

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15

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florida

4 posted 2003-08-30 12:49 PM

Very well done. Thoroughly enjoyed!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-08-30 01:23 PM

A terrific blending of passion and the
promise of what might be. Nicely done.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

6 posted 2003-08-30 03:21 PM

thank you and the pleasure as always was mine

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-08-30 04:30 PM

"and then you will wake to rise once again…"

~ you can take that to the bank!

Another fine collaboration, Dear Poets!

&

EA

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2003-08-30 04:33 PM

Beautifully done, you two...enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-08-30 05:50 PM

Bill and Michele:

My goodness, this is magical . . .
The two of you write beautifully together
Two of my favorite pens, melded into one
xxoo

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

10 posted 2003-08-30 06:02 PM

I loved this yesterday and tried to reply and either I hit the wrong button or there were too many reading it and it never showed up.

You two write well together and I was surprised Bill..no rhyming...and still a lovely poem

hugs
M

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

11 posted 2003-08-30 06:05 PM

loved it

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-08-30 08:00 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a magic duet, sweet friends, only when you believe in magic can you rise to the stars and if you hop aboard that chariot to your dreams, white horses are bound to cross paths! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Bill and inkedgoddess, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

13 posted 2003-08-30 08:05 PM

Elevating write from both of you.*Wink
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

14 posted 2003-08-30 08:44 PM

Oh, the ooos and ahhhs I heard myself whisper during this read. You two are wonderful together. Still shaking me head...

Patricia

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

15 posted 2003-08-31 05:35 PM

thanks again and thanks for the oohs and aahhs, where would we be without them?

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

16 posted 2003-08-31 05:50 PM

inkedgoddess - a most talented writer to work with, thank you for this...

BC

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

17 posted 2003-09-02 10:25 PM

nothing like a little self-love
hang on bill.........here we go...........
bump..........

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-02-2003 10:25 PM).]

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

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Orlando, Florida

18 posted 2003-09-03 10:47 AM

Great job you two. Bump!!!!!!!!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

19 posted 2003-09-03 11:06 AM

how utterly brilliant and beautiful

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