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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-08-29 09:22 PM


~*~

And reason is eclipsed by feeling
As we stand in the winds of the moon
Such sentiment in panoramic season
Elusively its slender fingers calm a soft caress
In distances relinquished from embracing shores
Such velvety sensations shivering
In opiate the flesh has craved to share
Set soaking to the marrow, whispers tingling the ear
These fantasies so rare that have sustained me

Each coveted expression draws us in
In…to undulating waves of satin rain
Slipping into air the very breath we share
Thoroughly within your charms to sink
Yet I am not adrift, or drowning…
You are the quiet harbor finally sought
The joy that follows chimes in gentle blow
As on your skin my touch again may glow
For nothing is as natural as this closeness

You are the gentle breeze that shimmers me
The guiding light that calls to peel away night’s cloak
Though sometimes blustered in the autumn
Never cold, and never harmed within your storm
A passion sparks behind the coming curtain
Unequaled and unbound in depth or form
Blown in from seas, across degrees of fond emotions
Skillfully in compliment and merriment
Paused to breeze the consciousness of lusty thoughts

Where zephyr falls the last of summer night recalls

Copyright Kkh 8/29/03


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-08-29 10:14 PM


What I would give to have the words that
you have stored in that mind of yours, and
be able to put them to paper as you do....

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-08-29 10:44 PM


wonderful literary genre presented,,

         


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3 posted 2003-08-29 10:58 PM


When you figure out how to bottle your talent, please let me know so I might buy a couple of cases...
This is a truly inspired write.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

Startime55
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4 posted 2003-08-30 12:17 PM


You weave a vision filled with sensation....STUNNING...

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5 posted 2003-08-30 10:44 AM


ThisDiamond~
I need not read any further in search of the loveliest penning of the day~

How beautiful are your poetic thoughts~
Such a talent ... and your web pages are softly stunning with more gifting of poetry~

Thank you for sharing ... you've made my day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com   

Ericc
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6 posted 2003-08-30 10:47 AM


Simply beautiful.
Eric

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7 posted 2003-08-30 10:47 AM


You are the gentle breeze that shimmers me
The guiding light that calls to peel away night’s cloak
Though sometimes blustered in the autumn
Never cold, and never harmed within your storm
A passion sparks behind the coming curtain
Unequaled and unbound in depth or form
Blown in from seas, across degrees of fond emotions
Skillfully in compliment and merriment
Paused to breeze the consciousness of lusty thoughts


Yes, Kathleen!!! This is so beautiful.  
Ethel


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