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Chapter 2
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Chapter 2 |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Chapter 2~Rules I wouldn’t have ever guessed That you would have the power To make me forget My own rules The first rule I broke Happened on a lunch hour That turned into three You back in my life a mere five days Yet I didn’t feel bad About what I had done It was the best lunch I had ever had At that time I still felt safe Safe because I knew you Safe because I knew myself I was just having fun And didn’t have a clue How wrong something can go When you’re lied to and When you lie to yourself |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I so hear you in these words.The realization that doesn't seem to come until later.Nicely done. Crystal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, Alot of ouch poems this morning, enjoyed. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Crystal-Thank you! Sy-hmmmm...blue friday? But thank you for reading! Susan |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I have to wonder sometimes what could they be thinking when they do this....I'm right there with ya...or was...at one time not to long ago...God bless and thank you for another great write. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
The bastard! Excellent story telling, interesting, indeed. So, there may be a 3rd chapter? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And didn’t have a clue How wrong something can go When you’re lied to and When you lie to yourself maybe we should form a support group...compare notes..bet they would allbe very similar... enjoying this process M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
LeeJ-Sometimes we all do things without thinking...Thank you for reading! Mike-Maybe the male character is, but I think there were mistakes on both sides...but I guess you will have to keep reading...there are 11 "chapters"... M-Compare notes..indeed...they would be similar at the very least...  Susan |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Susan, not many people who come from broken relationships take part of the blame themselves - at least from my experience, that is - and I think that shows class. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Mike- First, lol, please look at these as "fiction" too scary any other way...but yes, I think there is always two sides...But I won't go into Susan's lame beliefs on my happy pages of Blue!!! LOL Susan |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Susan - I had to reply to this one also. A continuation of it all... BC |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
and now... chapter 3????? |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"And didn’t have a clue How wrong something can go When you’re lied to and When you lie to yourself" Beautiful!!! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
At that time I still felt safe Safe because I knew you Safe because I knew myself I was just having fun And didn’t have a clue How wrong something can go When you’re lied to and When you lie to yourself Susan, I'm loving these...now where's chapter 3?? Hugs to you  Ethel Oh, and in the other thread I was just kidding you and Mike. No explanation was need. LOL |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
many times we forget the rules and dance befor paying the band.. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
bump |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I hate it when that happens... on to Ch3 Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good thoughts expressed,,, |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I'm dying to know what happens.. |
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Lady Godiva Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 35at the bottom of your glass |
I must read this from the beginning silly me!! Something to look forward to! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I'm reading all in the wrong order, but i don't think it makes any difference to the impact theyre having on me. another ouch. god, do we live the same life? you think youre being truthful with yourself, but at the same time, listen to yourself in your head, dismissing the things youre doing, that you promised you never would. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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