Open Poetry #28 |
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Betrayel |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US ![]() |
What made you ask me if you could partake of my bed last night of my heart and soul Why didn't you think that I would find out a wife and four children a home and a family Do I look stupid to you Did you think I'd not care or did you think I'd let go that you'd win me somehow Well you're wrong all above I found out and I care Sure my heart breaks but at least I know now and I was stupid Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
nope you were not stupid, you are in love and you cared, that is no crime...and shame on them for not taking mature responsible consideration for your heart.... Powerful write and the way many of us have felt at one time or another. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is the worst feeling to have, but you spoke of it with strong conviction.Stay strong and hold your head up high. Crystal |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Thanks...it's a battle. Most of the time I'd like to think I'm strong, but with moments of weakness. I'll keep my head up.... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
No, not stupid...loving, caring, and trusting. I keep saying it, we are so vulnerable when we are in love, but I know of no other way for it to be. You did everything "right" in your giving, and now just take care of yourself, and hold your lessons for the next time. ~K~ great write, by the way... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think sometimes we do act on our impulses too quickly and find ourselves in situations where we have to admit we made a mistake...I can only speak for myself...James |
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