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Open Poetry #28

Chained In Links

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-29 06:24 AM

Chained In Links

DO NOT STAND
TOO CLOSE
TO THIS GATE
WHILE IN OPERATION
of all of the
countless hours
and days
I have spent
starring at
this sign
placed upon
the heart
tonight I finally
understood it
one side of it
holds you
safely in
the other
locks you
out

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2003-08-29 06:26 AM

"one side of it
holds you
safely in
the other
locks you
out"

This is amazing Lady!

You have such a way of mesmerizing me with your words...just beautiful!

)))Tima(((

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-29 07:10 AM

I love the way you think, how you figure things out or question them..

it reminds me of me.

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

3 posted 2003-08-29 10:42 AM

ahhh....so that's what it is. :-) nice job

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-08-29 10:44 AM

Your words always have a way of touching the reader.
Crystal

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-08-29 11:18 AM

just nodding in agreement...
wonderful writing as always

M

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

6 posted 2003-08-29 01:53 PM

like i told you, it is amazing!

i cant wait for "one" day!

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

7 posted 2003-08-29 03:38 PM

Wow.... That is amazing. I love it.

(I know, I haven't really said anything, but it took me five minutes to type those seven words.... >.< I really like it.

)

Kielo

I'll never forget you.... I know that much, despite my foolishness.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-08-30 07:03 AM

you make me shiver from the inside out.

ANOTHER addition to my library from you this morning.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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