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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Shavings of iron Turning to rust Having no use Merely existing. Then magnet's pull Gave Shape to particles Reason for being Breath for life Strength And shavings sang. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
great imagery! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done gal.....shavings sang....my chest hairs are singing....Barbasol!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Aenimal: Thank you very much! *S* Toerag: Only you... *shaking head*... only you. *G* Thank you, Barbasol man... I'm heading east!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What an image, and what a way to say it -- beautifully done, Laura. I am putting this one in my library for sure....originality and perfect execution, with a depth of feeling that just takes your reader along....thank you for posting this beauty. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow !! Love this piece my friend. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Suthern One of my first poems ever had a similar theme to this...very thought provoking and much enjoyed! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific,,,, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernGal~ What a beautiful piece~ Stirring~ You have a safe and fun trip gal~  Remember to SING ... there'll be no one to hear you~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Everybody loves you and so do I.  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This is soooo awesome. It is truly an inspired write. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 A unique and very enjoyable read! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern, this was a really neat poem!  Huggums, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it happens that way, yes... I'm waiting for my magnet |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ratleader: There aren't many poets I admire and respect as much as you... so such incredible compliments truly honor me... I thank you so much! *S* Nightshade: I'm so glad! *S* Thank you, my friend. *S* Martie: I'm glad you enjoyed... thank you! *S* QjQ: Thank you! *S* Marge: The car is one place it's safe for me to sing... if I keep the windows tightly shut. LOL Thank you very much! *S* vandana: Thank you! *S* Seymour: And I love you, my friend... thank you! Ringo: Thank you so much for that kind response. *S* Midnitesun: Thank you so much for liking! *S* EA: You're a dear... thank you very much! *S* PS: Yes... and it's worth the wait. *S* Thank you! *S* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
"and shavings sang".....oh my...simply superb |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you, sweet one of multiple colors... I appreciate you! *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Suthern, this is just gorgeous, sweet friend, it is just phenominal how love can put the pieces back together even when it seems the danger has run forever! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, may love always keep you together and feeling more complete than ever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
nicely done......shavings sang?.......like Toerag I too thought of chest hairs......not mine of course but I do shave my hubby's.......lol. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
M'toe...even broken, seemingly useless pieces. *S* Thank you so much! *S* Lisann: Great minds, hunh? LOL Thank you! *S* |
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