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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2003-08-28 12:15 PM


echo

upon the mountain top
listening to the wind
whirling around me
as i call your name
no echo in return
.
.
.
.
bernie



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (08-28-2003 12:15 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-08-28 12:27 PM


makes me sit and think...good job

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-08-28 01:09 PM


reminds me of how I can tell when someone is thinking about me...I can feel it...almost hear their thoughts, question is....Who the heck is it? hehehehhehe, smiles and hugs..good jobber.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-08-29 04:51 AM


maybe it's a sign?
jade dragoness
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4 posted 2003-08-30 04:05 PM


some echoes are silent
and we may not ever understand

the why



And a smile here,
as I had to re-echo
with an edit to a typo.

[This message has been edited by jade dragoness (08-30-2003 04:09 PM).]

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