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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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0 posted 2003-08-28 11:52 AM



I remember
the easy way out

before your veins

before your skill

chose, I did
to beat upon my own

and give

what can I do?

now all is given

taken
for
this
ride

faulty signs
painted psychadelic

mistake me

for the last

no easy way to please
you

me?

harmony in every moment
passed

home was you

simple~inticate

remember those words
the kind of love

where there is

no easy way out.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-08-28 11:58 AM


remember those words
the kind of love

where there is

no easy way out.


Gemma, I would be will ing to bet that he remembers, too.
How could he not remember the kind of love you two shared?
Hugs and love to you, my friend  
Ethel

KristieSue
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2 posted 2003-08-28 12:29 PM


now all is given

taken
for
this
ride
~~~~~~~~~~~
yeah...been there...and there is NO easy way out, you're right.

Good job

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-08-28 12:40 PM


No easy way out and few seem willing or brave enough to work at staying in..
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-08-28 01:06 PM


very much enjoyed dear friend...and yes you are correct....there is no easy way out...
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2003-08-29 12:55 PM


Or, there sometimes is.. but very rarely do we chose it.

We live
we learn..

Deep down, we know we have to..

Great write, Gem

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-08-29 12:59 PM


we are much alike gem
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2003-08-30 12:49 PM


chose, I did
to beat upon my own

and give

what can I do?

There really is no other way, or shouldn't be.
It's all or nothing in my book, which
explains alot of things.  

Hugs gemma, gemma, great poem as always.

    

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