Open Poetry #28 |
Housefly |
eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
Housefly You’re resourceful Independent Persistent. But these attributes do not Make you any More desirable at all. You’re the wrong species Bad circumstances Different race, if you will And don’t think For one minute That you’re unique. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
angel . . . I love this! God it flows sooo smooth and the irony is just beautiful nice write xxoo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
eminor, Interesting, enjoyed. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was very interesting. well written too! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Interesting poem. Enjoyed. If you have a chance. I wrote a poem called "Handsome Gigolo" it's about spider. Miss Sexy Spider and Mr. Green Fly. It may give you a smile. It's under Bonnie j See Ya Bon-Bon |
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