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eminor_angel
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since 2003-05-22
Posts 323
Canada

0 posted 2003-08-27 05:31 PM


Housefly


You’re resourceful
Independent
Persistent.

But these attributes do not
Make you any
More desirable at all.

You’re the wrong species
Bad circumstances
Different race, if you will

And don’t think
For one minute
That you’re unique.


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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-08-27 05:34 PM


angel . . .
I love this!
God it flows sooo smooth and the irony is just beautiful
nice write
xxoo

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-08-27 06:38 PM


eminor,
Interesting, enjoyed.

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

3 posted 2003-08-27 07:27 PM


This was very interesting. well written too!
Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
4 posted 2003-08-27 07:47 PM


Interesting poem. Enjoyed.
If you have a chance. I wrote a poem called
"Handsome Gigolo" it's about spider.
Miss Sexy Spider and Mr. Green Fly.
It may give you a smile.
It's under Bonnie j
See Ya Bon-Bon

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