Open Poetry #28 |
Jade - Nobody Cared For The Girl Who Was |
Suede Junior Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 38Drifting on the soul |
Eyes, deeper than an ocean of souls Understanding was not possible Walking without movement Dreaming of violet skies to ponder beneath Trees, stood in fields of gold Swaying upon the breeze Sweet scent of spring Lord have mercy when judgement day shows No longer without innocence Too many have seen the story Simply for Jade Fallen angel, drift into eternity to find the lost [This message has been edited by Suede (08-27-2003 12:26 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Love this! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nicely put Suede....couldn't help read a sense of bitterness between the lines. Sadly beautiful~ and a belated welcome to you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Suede, I love the way you put the colors in there. You painted a beautiful picture in my minds eye. Hugs Ethel |
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jade dragoness Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 76 |
enjoying this one, my friend |
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