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Suede
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Drifting on the soul

0 posted 2003-08-27 12:26 PM


Eyes, deeper than an ocean of souls
Understanding was not possible
Walking without movement
Dreaming of violet skies to ponder beneath
Trees, stood in fields of gold
Swaying upon the breeze
Sweet scent of spring
Lord have mercy when judgement day shows
No longer without innocence
Too many have seen the story
Simply for Jade
Fallen angel, drift into eternity to find the lost

[This message has been edited by Suede (08-27-2003 12:26 PM).]

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-08-27 12:50 PM


Love this!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-08-28 05:01 AM


Nice...James
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
3 posted 2003-08-29 09:31 PM


Wonderful write
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-08-30 02:06 PM


Nicely put Suede....couldn't help read a sense of bitterness between the lines.

Sadly beautiful~ and a belated welcome to you.

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-08-30 02:32 PM


Suede, I love the way you put the colors in there.
You painted a beautiful picture in my minds eye.  
Hugs  
Ethel

jade dragoness
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6 posted 2003-08-30 02:55 PM


enjoying this one, my friend
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