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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-08-26 05:01 PM


Following footprints in the sand
flesh kissed
invitations
Racing the coming tide
reminds
i would be lost
without you

© Copyright 2003 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
kaleanna
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1 posted 2003-08-26 05:42 PM


good read

Meesh

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2003-08-26 08:07 PM


Applauding...I absolutely love this. Not one wasted word in the bunch. You've said an amazing amount here for all the more words that line the page
Kahlil
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3 posted 2003-08-26 10:13 PM


...sparkly, spirited, and sweet...
I want to be at YOUR beach!!!  

`k`

Kahlil
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4 posted 2003-08-27 08:57 AM


Somehow this has drifted through the pages and needs to be bumped up for more notice.
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5 posted 2003-08-27 09:54 AM


A pretty thing....that's the best kind of map to follow, my good man...maybe the only kind worth following.

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Robert Frazier
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6 posted 2003-08-27 10:14 AM


Kahlil,  too kind!
Sunnyone
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7 posted 2003-08-27 10:52 AM


Robert, this is wonderful...this brought back some happy memories of my own footprints in the sand years ago, growing up at the sea...well done!!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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8 posted 2003-08-27 11:46 AM


Enjoyed this short and awesome write! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

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