Open Poetry #28 |
I wonder |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Amazing tone of Viola, rich and noble You have given me ambition, miracles probable & poetic Imposing from the soul…undulations of the conscience How fortunate my world from the branch of your love Even when it withers, it grows and gives a new voice To my essence…training me to sing You store my core in embryonic thought Until I’m faint…where inner truths become plump Bubbling off my forehead…sharpening images Growing within…within a sunlight I can taste & feel Lingering in every depth of my being, I’m captivated simultaneously You hold that mountain of color, of hope Stirring unreachable dreams, coupling with all things Constant smell of your skin a golden touch of fire Permeates my whole being, looks upon your erotic smile I ask for nothing, except to know you To touch you…to perceive your essence The one person in this world who thinks as I To endeavor to make this insane world dance I wonder where you are, if your thinking of me I wonder who you are and if God will bless us to meet |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, You are an elegant writer and make a lovely bouquet. Enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LeeJ~ 'where inner truths become plump' Such a rich line of thought~ Enjoyed the entire piece, but this stood out in my mind~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
It all stood out for me, gah, how do you do this?? Amazing. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lee - what a fine writer you are I do not know hwo you do this but please keep doing I ask for nothing, except to know you To touch you…to perceive your essence The one person in this world who thinks as I To endeavor to make this insane world dance beautiful and when you least expect it xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I ask for nothing, except to know you To touch you…to perceive your essence The one person in this world who thinks as I To endeavor to make this insane world dance Oh yes, Lee...I have found this. It sounds like you have a lot of love inside your heart to give. I hope that you meet this man soon. Hugs Ethel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh LeeJ, What great lines you have written here. Wonderful. TD |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ If your heart already knows, then it will be so. This was beautiful! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lee...this is so very beautiful. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
oh my sometimes lee i wonder wher you get all your insperations, what a wonderful write of feelings,, |
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